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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
In a rush, desire flooding my senses. No more than a glance…I am awash in warm wanting. Your touch, like a flame, sets ablaze to passion. A kiss…long and searching, defines your longing, beckoning my will. 12-18-01 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Annie, we've all missed you so much! This is a timeless beauty glowing with passion and desire! (sigh) May your golden heart forever be kissed with bliss! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
What a rush!!! Beautifully written and captivating. Well done. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
This write, I most definitely enjoyed reading. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Intense write, very focused...could feel this! Nice to see you, again. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is absolutely a wonderfully sensual and image filled piece. Done with and economy of words that grabs the reader immediately and leaves a lasting impression. I love it and wish I had written this piece  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Ah yes the rushes, I know those when they happen. Intense poetry i must say, I liked it a lot Annie! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Everyone, thank you so much. I haven't had the inclination to write much the last few weeks, so I was a little rusty. I do appreciate the wonderful replies. )) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Stunning...simply stunning... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Someone is about to drown amidst the burning! Enjoyed this. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Have you and the 'Loper been staying after school together? This rivals any sensuality ever written on these pages! Admiring you at Passions. |
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