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SEA
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0 posted 2001-12-18 12:50 PM



His kiss lingered, long past good bye
She couldn’t forget, didn’t want to try
His touch yet burned, smoldering this ache
He was the one her heart, would never forsake

His eyes tore through her soul, possessing
His voice in her mind, gently caressing
With whispers replayed on summer’s breeze
Recalling shared passionate, breathy pleas

And she remembers him still
Knows through all time, she always will
Unable to release this memory’s hold
Her love of this man silently extolled

On the wind, sent heartfelt prayer his way
The words she never had voice to say
“I loved you then, I love you now
with all that heaven will allow”

~SEA~


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1 posted 2001-12-18 12:59 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Susan, you are soooooo romantic, your beautiful heart sings in your words! (smiles) May memories of love forever fill her heart and may eternal love forever glisten in her! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-18-2001 12:59 PM).]

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2 posted 2001-12-18 01:00 PM


Noah, you are such a sweetie! Thank you....
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3 posted 2001-12-18 01:06 PM


I especially enjoyed the last stanza of this truly heartfelt write.
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4 posted 2001-12-18 01:13 PM


Bittersweet...if only heaven would allow the memories to be new, again.  
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5 posted 2001-12-18 01:19 PM


His kiss lingered, long past good bye
She couldn’t forget, didn’t want to try
His touch yet burned, smoldering this ache
He was the one her heart, would never forsake
===================================
And she remembers him still
Knows through all time, she always will
Unable to release this memory’s hold
Her love of this man silently extolled
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“I loved you then, I love you now
with all that heaven will allow”
=====================================

Good grief ... some of these lines are tattooed on my soul ... not inked but burned in ... sloooow burn.
You do know you just penned a moth anthem, right?
You do know you just penned one awesome poem dont you?
Then you will also know...(IWIHWT)
Very very very cool poem Sea-girlie.

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.


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6 posted 2001-12-18 01:30 PM


silly mothy me....forgot to put in me library

*click*

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.


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7 posted 2001-12-18 01:30 PM


Sensational!!
A voice well found!

Did not like this one ...LOVED it!!

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-12-18 01:32 PM


OK...my comp is having a senior moment
lets try this one more mothy time
*click*  ROFLMAO

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9 posted 2001-12-18 01:34 PM



I'll ditto JM's "real" comment...my comp doesn't have "moments"...

with the exception of keeping this moment...


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10 posted 2001-12-18 07:11 PM


Fantabulous, gal

Gracious, but you sure can write!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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11 posted 2001-12-18 07:48 PM


Sea, just popped in to say hello and saw your lovely poem. You always touch my heart with your romantic writes.
Have a wonderful holiday dear friend.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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12 posted 2001-12-18 08:30 PM


Susan,

    So pretty your writing is Once again, I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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13 posted 2001-12-18 08:34 PM


Soft and lovely, SEA! Very nice!
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14 posted 2001-12-18 08:44 PM


The words she never had voice to say
“I loved you then, I love you now
with all that heaven will allow”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
OH SEA!!!!   This is....this is...is...
one heck of a write girlie!  
And you KNOW I love it!!  
WOW!!  Oh My...*Sigh*
~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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15 posted 2001-12-18 10:36 PM


Opeth~ thank you!!

Duncan~ yes, if only....

Janet~ a moth anthem....yes, I suppose it is LOL thank you so much for your generous praise

Shadowed_Innersense~ wow, very cool thank you and welcome!!

Deca~ (((hugs))) thank you

Interloper~ you are so kind to me, thank you

Dee~ hay girl!! Good to see you around!! Thank you, I hope you have a beautiful holiday season too!!

Tara~ thank you sweet friend

Denise~ you are wonderful, thank you!!

Nancy~ thank you for making me smile, you reply so nice to me

~SEA

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16 posted 2001-12-18 10:39 PM


I know the power of those lingering kisses...some touch us so much more then others...James
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17 posted 2001-12-18 10:49 PM


James, I have a feeling yours would be one to linger.... thank you
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18 posted 2001-12-18 11:00 PM


As always, a very lovely write, sweet friend.   (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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19 posted 2001-12-19 03:01 PM



Ah yes, how did this slip of a poem find it's way without my seeing it?  Well done girl...very well done!

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20 posted 2001-12-19 06:58 PM


Circe darling girl I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous.

The lines in this are soooooooo amazing, this is really and truly outstandingly good. Normally your writing is wonderful this is even better than normal. This is an Even Now poem, and we all have at least one of those inside I think. Wonderful outstanding writing darling girl
The flow and the rhythm is without doubt utterly excellent.

Really well written and a really great piece from you.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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21 posted 2001-12-19 07:00 PM


OMG Sea, ditto Janet Marie...this one even spoke my heart!  I am sure a lot of people will ache with this one, excellent writing my sweet friend!

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

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22 posted 2001-12-19 07:36 PM


It's all been said,
just thought I'd agree,
This poem is beautiful...
Lingering...by SEA!!!

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23 posted 2001-12-20 10:49 AM


SEA, I love this beautiful poem, filled with longing. Its flows so smoothly. Very nice work. Cheryl
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24 posted 2001-12-20 11:04 AM


This is a very pretty piece!
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25 posted 2001-12-20 11:25 AM


SEA,
Well expressed. Glad to have someone put to words our experience. Words so true.

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26 posted 2001-12-20 02:37 PM


I love each word so true to love. Thanks for sharing.
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27 posted 2001-12-20 09:43 PM


Sue...I love this write and I simply cherish
the last two lines...so powerful a statement.

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28 posted 2002-01-05 11:16 AM


enjoy
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