»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #17
»
I'll Be
| Open Poetry #17 |
|
I'll Be |
|
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
I’ll Be By: Noah Eaton 3/3/01 I’ll be the one who steps into your life To kiss your tears away, to light a heart jaded in sorrow To hold you close, and let you share your pain as I heal your wounds And hold your hand as we lean our heads on each other’s shoulder, giving you purity’s light I’ll be the one to talk over everything with you, share thoughts, and never make you feel lonely again Giving you everything only I can give you, Make sure you could be the happiest lover you could be Lay close beside you with my hand over your shoulder when you’re feeling dispirited Massaging your hair, touching you gently, reminding you that you are never alone And I love you with all my life, and this love will never end I’ll be the nightlight in your soul on every dark day, the one who tucks you in at night and keeps you safe Lathering you with the dusty starlight, from which your tears establish Bathing your mind with the succulent shampoo of sincerity A conditioner of trust follows All I ever want to be is the believer for you And you the listener, and vice-versa Every night when we fall asleep I will rest my head beside yours, As our warm moans and breathes light our hearts As in the meantime, I would dream of you Moonlight’s benign sheets attaching two bonded souls You…and me… I'll be the one to hold you Shower your lips with kisses And lay my head beside yours as we dream On the same star sharing true loves wishes I’ll be the one to love you That is what I want to be… I’ll be yours And you will be mine… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-18-2001 12:05 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Noah, I like this Very Much! Well done, Young man! |
||
|
N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,I love the line "I`ll be your nightlight in your soul on a cloudy day"    Juanita |
||
RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Wow Noah! I LOVE this! I'm sure you'll be all this and more to one special lady! hugs and kisses. Keep these beautiful works of art coming. love, Joanna |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - your writings just keep getting better and better. This one is great, and I have shown it to someone special to read... BC |
||
|
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Another lovely read Noah. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
||
|
His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Hi Noah, I'm new to this site but I wondered if your poetry would be as warm and lovely as your replies to others. You didn't disappoint. Lovely words for that special someone. Cheryl |
||
|
amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I am amazed again and again at your incredible ability to express the good things we human's are capable of feeling. Could you bottle some of that and market it? Noah, you are the essence of what it means to be wonderful!! |
||
|
Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Remarkable words which have flowed from your beautiful heart my friend! Your love must feel like the luckiest girl in the world to have someone like yourself. Nice writing yet again Noah, good job! From your good friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
||
|
Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Noah: Your soul dances upon your words for all to see, a truly beautiful write. Keep astounding us with your words! Cheers! Ter Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
||
|
Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Wow! As always you've written another poem filled with romance and love. Enjoyed! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
||
|
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness...all I can say is someone is VERY lucky to have you! Simply beautiful, My Friend!  Sauni @~~~>~~ |
||
|
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Moah, This is beautiful Joanna is a very lucky young lady. I'm sure she knows how blessed she is to have someone as caring and loving as you my friend Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
||
|
dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
Whoever this girl may be she will be very lucky to have a guy like you. You're a good and loving person, and it shows through what you write. Great poem. Noelle |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, Noah. I know you will be all this and more,when the right lady comes to you. Sandra |
||
|
Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so lovely Noah. Some lucky girl will snap you up one day, and she'll never let go of such a romantic as you are. You do write remarkably well of love. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
somehow, I know that you will be. . . great job here Noah. . . keep it up. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
|
GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - Very emotive and passionate write. Well done. Dave |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
