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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-18 12:03 PM



Your Absolut Bond

I don’t hate you
but the anger in me you have freed
don’t know what you are thinking
but you underestimate me

you have now hurt someone
that I truly love
but this is your past
and it , you can not rise above

a man is as only
as good as his word
to the people that depend on you
that word is never heard

funny isn’t it
how fairness comes around
I go up
as you go further down

the empty phonies they cheer you
as you drink from your absolut glass
and ill protect the ones I love
making our bonds last

"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Opeth
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1 posted 2001-12-18 01:24 PM


"a man is as only
as good as his word
to the people that depend on you
that word is never heard"
[b]
that stanza froze me in my seat - Your frustration is alive in these words. My heart goes out to you, if this your reality.

Sven
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2 posted 2001-12-18 11:13 PM


these words speak volumes. . .

I like the spelling here of "Absolut". . . it's a great device helen. . . excellent. . .

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Tracey
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3 posted 2001-12-18 11:43 PM


Powerful, very powerful. I think I have an idea what this is about. Glad to see you have risen, and unfortunately, you can't do much to help those who want to drown.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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4 posted 2001-12-19 10:23 AM


BRAVO!!!You speak from your heart and say exactly what you are feeling about this man who has hurt someone you care about. Very well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-12-19 10:29 AM


Slick,
You said a mouth full, enjoyed the read.

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