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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-18 07:37 AM



No Non-sense

did you ever taste
the sadness of my lips
or hold the loneliness
of my finger tips
smell the real fear
that I exposed
in your rush by me
you didn’t I suppose
couldn’t you see it
the pain on my face
and with so little
could have been erased
so now all you are allowed
in a voice so clear
is just the echo of me
the only sound you hear


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-12-18 07:40 AM


Slick,
Good for you Enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-18 08:51 AM



(sad sigh) Oh Helen, I'm so sorry that this person could never feel for you and help wash your tears and pain away, I couldn't help but cry reading this to feel your cry for compassion behind your words! (sigh) Know you are loved by many now, and we are always here for you when you need someone to talk to! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Robert A
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since 2001-10-29
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3 posted 2001-12-18 10:12 AM


enjoyed the read


arthur
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since 2001-08-14
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england
4 posted 2001-12-18 10:37 AM


this is so very good
It paints a picture
Nice and clear
yes
it is very good
Thanks
arthur

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2001-12-18 02:25 PM


1slick_lady - your writings I read, and I am touched by your sincerity...

BC

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