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The Frazzle of my Dazzle
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The Frazzle of my Dazzle |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Frazzle of my Dazzle You are the dilly, in my dally, in the greenest of my valley. You’re the candy of my Randy and the power in my brandy The chewy of my taffy in the center of my daffy In other words you ring my chimes and are the baker of my rhymes. You’re the dazzle of my frazzle and the frilly of my silly And the shilly of my shally in the actions of my dally. You paint me in your colored hues, all my thinking and my views In other words you ring my chimes and are the baker of my rhymes. You are the phantom of my fantasy the flower of my ecstasy You fly me to the mountain top you are my garden and my crop. You are the butterfly I see; you are the wind upon my sea. In other words you ring my chimes and are the baker of my rhymes. You are the ghost of love in view the truest love I ever knew. The harp that plays the sirens cry the song that sounds my every sigh You are the friction of my fiction my only dereliction In other words you ring my chimes and are the baker of my rhymes. From the marrow of my sorrow, I’ve sort surcease in nightly borrow The punishing of my crown of thorn, to the wishing that I be reborn Forgive me. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So - wanna go spuddlin'? Splashin' while it's puddlin'?...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Of course, so when you coming down again. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You’re the candy of my Randy and the power in my brandy The chewy of my taffy in the center of my daffy ===================================== You paint me in your colored hues, all my thinking and my views In other words you ring my chimes and are the baker of my rhymes. ======================================== You are the butterfly I see; you are the wind upon my sea. In other words you ring my chimes and are the baker of my rhymes. You are the ghost of love in view the truest love I ever knew. The harp that plays the sirens cry the song that sounds my every sigh You are the friction of my fiction my only dereliction In other words you ring my chimes and are the baker of my rhymes. From the marrow of my sorrow, I’ve sort surcease in nightly borrow The punishing of my crown of thorn, to the wishing that I be reborn ===================================== forgive you? For what? Hanging the moon and making us swoon!!  I beg for mercy and you turn up the chimes in your rhymes *L* You dont play fair Stinky LOL Well I've been told by a few that I have frazzeled and frizzed their hair and drove them to drink -- does that count? *L*  jeepers creeper me thinks Im gonna need a nurse and oxygen after all these *Sy induced sighs* What a sweet treat you have baked to go with me morning tea ... care to join me? *L* anyone ever tell ya youre cute when your frazzeled LOL  meYou're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, yes indeed, and may love forever have your heart singing in gorgeous rhythm and rhyme forever! (smiles) I love your form and voice, it is always so inventive and entertaining! BRAVO!!! (big hugggssssss) May you forever bake rhymes from your loving heart to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If I were to forgive you, would that mean I wouldn't get to read more of this? Then no way, my friend, no way... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
forgive you of your frazzle?? but I love the way you razzle!! your poetry does indeed dazzle and chime some bells on its own I loved this Seymour  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Did I ever miss one of your teas? And have a bucket full for Randy. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Thank you Mistletoe. Ok Sunshine, then I'll just keep posting. *L* Sea, Thank you my sweet. *L* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You just made my day with your little frizzle frazzle and you sure did make me dazzle Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, How sweet of you to bring this back. Thank you. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my.....I am dazzled and swooning upon a wave of chimes and rhymes.....oh my goodness....however can I forgive you if I wanna read some more.... Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I was going to say something but my tongue is in a knot Funtastic!~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Yes you can, thank you sweet. *L* Mysteria, Thank you for the read and fun answer. *L* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - ah ha said I; but I'm fuddlin in the puddlin... I thoroughly enjoyed this one... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, It was fun to write, thanks for the read. |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
I had to bring this one back because I enjoyed it so much . Gotta keep the frazzle alive!  ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chelle, That was most kind, thank you. *L* |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i am open-mouthed, not knowing how to comment... i'll try later.. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
That was a very original rhyme and I enjoyed it very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Faterider, Any old comment will do. Opeth, Thank you for the enjoyed. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Seymour,ask me if I got tongue tied?  I`m like I wasn`t drinking while reading this.   Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (12-21-2001 02:20 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Love it Mr. Tabin..ha..nicely done ...a fun read.. ~Victoria~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jaunita, I hope not. LOL Victoria, Glad you enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Try reading this out loud after a couple of Ho Ho Ho's! Great write! But, forgive you for what? NEVER!! *Happy Holidays* ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you for the WOW. *L* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour you are a character and this is perfect! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
very well composed, this double rhyme scheme and the ladies are dazzled, or a fizzle over the sizzle?lol. Bravo. |
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