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Michael G
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0 posted 2001-12-18 02:02 AM


I found a small hurried excuse
laughing at the sky in sequence
happy to be misserable
longing to more than the sum,
slamming against the doors
of future intolerance
which floats around all of us
hoping to catch a glimpse of promise.

© Copyright 2001 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-12-18 10:54 AM



This had a very closed in feeling, like being trapped in a closet...

thank you for this Michael...it's good to have you home again!

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-18 11:12 AM


My heart felt loss of hope in your words...I can only hope that taking time to see the beauty and love around you will bring hope back to your heart. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-18 11:32 AM



(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Michael, this is so so sad, I feel hopelessness from your heart! (sigh) I pray you can not let those doors of intolerance lock you out and you can open them and see the light of hope and promise before your loving heart always! (sigh) Believe in yourself, and you will find all the promise of joy in life! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, our hearts are always with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Jenn E
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Kelowna, BC, Canada
4 posted 2001-12-18 11:33 PM


Ummmmm. WOW......
Not very creative in my comments now am I.......lol
This one of those that left me wondering......
As ALways
Jenn E

Krawdad
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5 posted 2001-12-19 12:17 PM


I'll agree with Jenn E on this one . . . wondering of future summations, missing the sky . . .
Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
6 posted 2001-12-19 01:03 PM


So good to read one of yours again.  We have missed you.

Love,
Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



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