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Larry C
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0 posted 2001-12-18 12:43 PM


That Little Thing You Do
By Larry Chadwick

I love to look deep into your eyes,
And I love your gentle smile.
I love the sparkle that I see,
It makes it all worth while.

But it is that added little touch,
That really warms my heart.
You may not even notice,
It is such a little part.

It is while our eyes are locked,
And I sense the little grin,
Is when it starts to happen,
And then you do it once again.

It seems to come so natural,
That’s why I like it best.
You put your hand between us,
And you touch me on the chest.



[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-18-2001).]

[This message has been edited by Larry C (12-19-2001 12:24 AM).]

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1 posted 2001-12-18 12:56 PM


It seems to come so natural,
That’s why I like to best.
You put your hand between us,
And you touch me on the chest.

Great write, Larry.  Loved the way this brought me to the moment.  You're right, it's those little things that make a love wondrous.  

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2 posted 2001-12-18 01:01 AM


Thanks Duncan. You caught my typo before it got fixed. LOL Your right about the little things!  
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3 posted 2001-12-18 02:52 AM


That is really sweet and tender, Larry. I'm glad I didn't miss this one tonight.  
Larry C
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4 posted 2001-12-18 10:02 AM


Kacy,
Unusual, huh? Glad your here.  

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5 posted 2001-12-18 10:32 AM


must be a woman right?


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6 posted 2001-12-18 11:03 AM


It seems to come so natural,
That’s why I like it best.
You put your hand between us,
And you touch me on the chest.
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Ah Larry....You know, it's really nice to hear a man say what little things he likes about a woman.  Not enough men open up and tell us just what it is that makes the moment special.  Good write. Hugs, Nancy

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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7 posted 2001-12-18 11:05 AM


*sigh* it is the little things that make love eternal......I love the whole feel of this poem. Very well done, Larry. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-12-18 11:35 AM


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(sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, your loving heart always captures each lovely moment of pure romance through your touching verse! (smiles) May you forever cherish the simple joys of love eternally and happily! (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!

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May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2001-12-18 11:40 AM


Larry,

    A sweet write Muchly enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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10 posted 2001-12-18 12:21 PM


Robert,
Huh?

Nancy Lee,
Glad I could help!

Karen,
Thanks. I really appreciate that.

Noah,
Thanks. (You do know your smilies from that website you were using are no longer valid here, right?)

Tara,
That makes me happy.

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11 posted 2001-12-18 01:07 PM


aww Larry, such a sweet, sincere write!
ah life's little pleasures mean so much

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12 posted 2001-12-18 02:15 PM


Larry - tender are your words in this write. It's a nice feeling when all you have said happens. These feelings I know, and from your writing, you know them also...

BC

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13 posted 2001-12-18 04:26 PM


RosePetal,
Thanks sweetie.

Bill,
Absolutely. Good feelings and good times.

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14 posted 2001-12-19 09:23 AM


Larry,I love the way you write from the heart

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Larry C
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15 posted 2001-12-19 10:01 AM


Juanita,
Hey...thanks for that sweet compliment.

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