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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-12-17 08:31 PM


Ok this poem is kinda a follow on to an old one posted on the main forums, its about how love could follow the seasons.

Snowy white picture,
Contrasted bitter cold,
And although it was fun,
I was lonely on my own,

But now the cold melted,
And all is new again,
My loneliness I felt,
Turned to a feeling unknown,

Spring brought the wramth again,
With flowers and trees have their leaves,
And I will be contented,
When spring turns to summer.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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BloomingRose
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1 posted 2001-12-17 09:05 PM


Nice poem. I thank God for all the seasons we share.

Deb

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2 posted 2001-12-17 09:10 PM


Very nice write.  I am glad I live where we have four seasons.  Hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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3 posted 2001-12-17 09:57 PM




(smiles) Oh Maria, this is sooooo beautifully upbeat and cheerful! (smiles) I'm so happy to see spring is shining in your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-17 10:46 PM


This was great, i loved the connection of love with the seasons of the year.  Very creative, I enjoyed reding this immensely.

     Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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