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arthur
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0 posted 2001-12-17 05:20 PM



Love is Dead

Love is dead,can you not see
The heart has bled,she was all to me

We pass by unseen,no one cares
So casual it seems , the vacant stares

As we arrive , another sorrow goes
Can I survive it, take the coming blows

I want to scream, "love is dead"
But "Thank you for coming "
Was all I said.

Arthur

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-17 05:25 PM


*sigh* now why does this bring such hot tears to my eyes. Will I ever understand the emotions of others or will I just share their pain? My heart hurts for you, arthur. You deserve love in your life and I pray you receive the gift of it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2001-12-17 05:38 PM


Auther,

       I am so sorry to see this pain   Love is never completely dead... at least not your capability of loving. *hugs* to you.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-12-17 05:42 PM



(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Arthur, this is sooooooo very sad, my heart cries out to you! (sigh) I pray with all my heart that you will again love soon and find true happiness to forever whisper in your heart! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so very much, dearest friend, my heart is always with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Arthur, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-12-17 06:27 PM


Oh, Arthur, this is so sad.  (hug)

Kathleen (Kay)
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Krawdad
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5 posted 2001-12-17 07:01 PM


Ouch!
But an interesting piece.

walker
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6 posted 2001-12-17 07:07 PM


Love maybe sleeping but the love inside our hearts can never die, that's what keeps us going. Great expression.
Enchantress
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7 posted 2001-12-17 08:03 PM


I want to scream, "love is dead"
But "Thank you for coming "
Was all I said.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Michael, this is so very true!  How often do we bite our tongues and not say what we are really thinking.  Love the rhyme technique in this one also.  
Great writing here!
~Hugs, across the pond love, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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8 posted 2001-12-17 08:39 PM


Yes I have thought the same but love will revive itself always.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


catalinamoon
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9 posted 2001-12-17 09:20 PM


Truly feel this in my heart, Arthur. How much love can hurt.
Sandra

RosePetal
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10 posted 2001-12-17 09:23 PM


Arthur,

I'm sorry for your pain. Love may have died for you, but a beautiful woman is going to bring it alive again for you.
((big hugs))

1slick_lady
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11 posted 2001-12-17 10:02 PM


i know just how you feel...helen
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-12-18 01:41 AM


I know this feelings...we become so attached to a certain one...so emotionally involved that we want it to work with all of our heart...and when it doesn't we do feel like love is dead...James
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