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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-12-17 12:03 PM


This is a challenge of Serenity's that I did last year. Lisann...you are a woman and of infinite worth. **big hugs**

I AM (Serenity's Challenge)

I am me, a woman owned by no one
I wonder everything, loving all life
I hear whispers of magic in the wind
I see visions of pegasus in clouds
I want to find the mate of my own soul
I am me, a woman owned by no one

I pretend to be content all the time
I feel the beat of heart of him I love
I touch his lips with mine with passion's heat
I worry that love will not be for me
I cry when I read sorrow of lost love
I am me, a woman owned by no one

I understand unconditional love
I say that there is a soulmate for us all
I dream of sharing all of who I am
I try to give love whereever I can
I hope for all to find the love desired
I am me, a woman owned by no one

Karen Torbiak 2001 ©


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2001-12-17 12:46 PM


Karen darling girl this is without doubt one of your utter best, you really are getting to be soooooooooo good. I ought to in truth be wishing you all kinds of bad things because I’m Green with jealousy. However how can I be jealous of this it is utterly wonderful, as are you
Fabulous writing darling girl utterly fabulous
I remember the challenge and your answer to it is absolutely perfect
            
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
    

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Lisann
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since 2001-01-31
Posts 350

2 posted 2001-12-17 12:59 PM


Owned by no one---what a beautiful thought.  I am my own person--this I do believe.  But,  I am still working on being free.  Free from memories, free from pain, free from fear--but most importantly---free For love.

This was beautiful Startime--Thank you

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
3 posted 2001-12-17 04:56 PM


would i be right in thinking that
"owned by no one"
is more of a cry of despair than A staement of contentment
?????????
Arthur
who has now given up

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
4 posted 2001-12-17 05:55 PM


Karen...you have shared a gift...one that
I am sure is greatly appreciated...

Owned by no one.....that is correct...
for you are your own person....  And you
become more of an individual each day that
passes...I hope both of you can do that.

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