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peaches73533
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0 posted 2001-12-17 10:27 AM


This is dedicated to my three children, Timmy, Deidra, and Charlie.May the always aspire to be the best they can be and have the fullest life possible.

My children have always touched my heart.
I try to teach them what I know, to make them smart.
It's amazing to see and watch them grow.
And to see all of the things that they know.
They all have my hair and my eyes.
But they all share their daddies smile.
First, there's Timmy he seems so big at ten.
We spend alot of time talking in the den.
We both learn about sports along the way.
He gives a hundred percent every time he plays.
He helps me out so very much.
And he does not know, how my heart he does touch.
Then there's Diedra, so full of life.
Sometimes it's hard to keep her in my sight.
Her beauty and radiance shines through.
She always knows just what to do.
Still walks on the tips of her toes at eight.
Learning to dance, cheerlead, and other things that she just can't wait.
And then there's Charlie, who's almost seven.
When I look at him, I think of heaven.
At such a young age, he knows what he wants to be.
A doctor that is so full of dreams.
He has such a great imagination.
Showing so much love and so much elation.
No matter what they aspire to be.
I love them as only a mother can see.
They are worth more treasures than all of this world.
My charming two boys and my sweet little girl.
So, here is a look at part of my life.
And the reason I chose to be a mother and a wife.

Peaches

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Opeth
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1 posted 2001-12-17 10:30 AM


Your dedication was most definitely written with much love and caring...what you feel for your children was plain and clear in your words. I enjoyed reading this.
N orth Carolina Girl
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2 posted 2001-12-17 10:38 AM


Peaches,I know exactly how you feel.I only have one son and he is married with a son of his own.But he is and always will be the most important person in my life.But then comes my grandson I really enjoyed reading this.


Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Startime
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3 posted 2001-12-17 10:44 AM


Oh I just love it.....this is such a heart touching poem. I love to read of a persons love for their children and you have expressed it with such beauty here. Thank you, so much, for sharing it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

peaches73533
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OK, USA
4 posted 2001-12-17 10:57 AM


Opeth:Glad you enjoyed it.

N orthCarolinaGirl:Glad I could arise those feelings for you.Thanks so much.
Startime:Glad you enoued it.You lnow me I love tho share.

Peaches

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5 posted 2001-12-17 06:47 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is the most beautiful declaration of love to your children that your loving heart could ever pen! (smiles) May your children grow happily to become the loving sweet spirit that you are! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful! We all love you so very much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peaches, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-12-17 08:38 PM


There is no better poetry than that which touches the heart....this one does, peaches  
RosePetal
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7 posted 2001-12-17 09:28 PM


Peaches,

You have 3 fine children! I bet they are so proud of you for being the greatest mommy!
I don't have children yet because I am too young, but I hope someday I'll be a wonderful mother just like you are.

EagleScorpion
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8 posted 2002-01-10 12:00 PM


peaches thats so beatiful im so glad for you..
and to think, we are the sons and daughters of mothers and fathers who love US too!!

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

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