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walker
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0 posted 2001-12-17 07:24 AM



We love
we kiss
we desire
just to satisfy
this void that
we all have to learn
to live with
But if but a moment we
forget how to love
we begin the cycle
like apprentices
in the trials of love

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-12-17 09:37 AM


Well written. I'm glad I did not miss this one

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

MrLeslie
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2 posted 2001-12-17 09:54 AM


Excellent and educational..Well done!

Leslie de la Haye AKA Bald Eagle.

peaches73533
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3 posted 2001-12-17 10:10 AM


Very well spoken and right on the money.
Peaches

rosepetals25
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4 posted 2001-12-17 10:54 AM


walker,

     I'm glad I stopped in   Well written.


Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-17 10:59 AM


BRAVO!!!Have you ever got it all figured out. Well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2001-12-17 02:10 PM


walker - you tell it like it is. Great write...

BC

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7 posted 2001-12-17 03:43 PM


Walker,

yep, you sure do tell it like it is.
You are awesome lady!

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8 posted 2001-12-17 04:28 PM




(sigh) Oh Walker, this is soooooo very true, you always have such a beautiful way of explaining in your words! (smiles) May your heart live an eternal cycle of sweet true love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vlraynes
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9 posted 2001-12-17 04:33 PM



Walker-
   Wonderfully said...enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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