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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-12-16 08:33 PM


You're not sure who you really are or what you want to be
I think you are sweet and great, that's just plain to see
But I'll tell you now like I told you before, I can't get caught up in this game
Its not for me, at least not anymore
I'm not going to allow myself to feel anything for you because of the fear of being hurt
I like you alot, I really do, we are great friends me and you
However, you chose the wrong girl to play with

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-12-16 09:01 PM


Good for you, Laura! No one should mess around with another for whatever reason.  

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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2 posted 2001-12-16 09:05 PM


That's right Laura!
You stick up for your rights before your heart gets broken.  ~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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3 posted 2001-12-16 09:10 PM


Elizabeth and Nancy,

Thank you both for your responses!  I agree with both of you on this matter. :-)

Take Care,
Laura

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4 posted 2001-12-16 09:28 PM


Do whatever you think is best for you, whatever that may be, you'll thank yourself.  Nice write Laura!

     Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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5 posted 2001-12-16 10:08 PM


Hypnosis,

Thanks for the response.  I am doing what I feel is best for myself.

Laura

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6 posted 2001-12-17 05:08 PM



BRAVO!!! Yes, always do what your heart feels, for you are such a loving person with a big heart and deserve the most beautiful love of all! (kiss on cheek) Always believe in yourself and you will be happy! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laura, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-12-17 05:33 PM


BRAVO!!!!You must do what is right for you and though it may sometimes seem confusing no one has the right to play games with your heart. Very Well said. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-12-17 11:48 PM


Noah and Star,

Thank you very much for your replies.  Noah you are a very sweet person.  

Thanks for reading!

~Laura~

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9 posted 2001-12-18 12:55 PM


hi Laura,

it must hurt to witness the insecurities of a loved one...take care, be strong, i hope the right one comes along soon...

ParisGrl
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10 posted 2001-12-19 12:41 PM


Fate,

Yes it does make me feel bad to see her go through this but if it turns out like i think it will......she'll be better off.

Thanks for reading!

~Laura~

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11 posted 2001-12-19 07:13 PM


I couldn't have written this better

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

ParisGrl
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12 posted 2001-12-20 01:35 AM


Carol,

Thank you for your response.....I appreciate it.  I hope you enjoyed my poem.  

~Laura~

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