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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-12-16 05:48 PM



The softeness of your
kiss
stir all the emotions
within me
but like a flower
that remains intact
after a storm
I failed to reach the
depths of you
And I capture the kiss
embracing the moment
framing it forever
convencing my heart
in a detailed
but inaccurate memory
of how much this kiss
was meant to be

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-16 05:56 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Walker, such tender memories of sweet love fill your heart! (sigh) May you always share a kiss that estimates eternity ever after! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2001-12-16 07:04 PM


oo baby, oo baby... ooooo!!!  

This is a pucker up piece if I ever did see one!!!

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
3 posted 2001-12-16 07:09 PM


You have written this feeling very well Walker. It is heartbreaking indeed, when we can’t touch the other person as deeply as they have touched us. Though, that doesn’t stop us from trying again and again.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
4 posted 2001-12-16 07:13 PM


*sigh* how tender and filled with passion this wonderful poem is. Made me want to dream again. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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5 posted 2001-12-17 01:21 AM


And I capture the kiss
embracing the moment
framing it forever
convencing my heart
in a detailed
but inaccurate memory
of how much this kiss
was meant to be

Good to know I'm not the only one with a selective memory.  I understand perfectly, walker.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2001-12-17 05:19 AM


Yes I have some of these memories...James
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