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D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2001-12-16 12:16 PM


My inner soul is very fragile and in it all I want to show my inner beauty in thoughts.

Crystal towers sparkling within you
So beautiful that the stars shine threw your eyes
But so frail the crystals are

That any broken heart will shatter them
So the barrier of former hurts create the fences
To protect the beautiful treasures

For all the colors reflect into the crystals
To create the rainbow personality within
To bless the world with the imagination
That children play in fun with

The music you create within your chimes
Effects all the senses of humanity

Somehow you have weathered the storms
That would have taken the reflections out of you
To only steal the lightning
And seal it within you

To electrify the towers with light
To guide you on your search
To put a rainbow halo around us all

D.Lester Young (11/2/01)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

© Copyright 2001 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2001-12-16 12:26 PM


Wow!  I like the use of chimes!!  It sent goosebumps...poems are my feeble attempt to show what's on the inside and that realization was inspired by your piece!!  It means alot to know that others see the fragility and cherished beauty of the being...especially in ourselves!!
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2 posted 2001-12-16 12:39 PM




(smiles) Oh Leslie, this is sooooooo brethtakingly beautiful, your lovely words chime with such loving grace! (smiles) May the crystal towers of our imaginations forever shine with innocence of the child within our hearts and love and may we forever hold true these timeless treasures of joy! (sigh) Absolutely breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Leslie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-16 03:24 PM


This is absolutely stunning. I will save this to read again and again, and to hear the ethereal notes and chimes you've given us, complete with crystal pure thoughts.
This is pure poetic music. Thank you so much for sharing this.

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4 posted 2001-12-16 06:38 PM


"The music you create within your chimes
Effects all the senses of humanity"

This poem is so nice, it's getting a bump to the top, and of course, another reading from me  


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