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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2001-12-16 11:42 AM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#60"
Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON


love
you disappoint me

a friend always there

know
I was that someone


"Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace

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© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-16 11:50 AM




(sigh) Love sometimes doesn't work out, but deep down, there will always be a friend that reminds you of the love deep down in your loving heart! (sigh) Such a touching poem, sweet friend, your short poems are always filled with such incredible thoughts and emotions! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big huggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-16 01:50 PM


Mark...very nice...I love these!  Hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2001-12-16 02:57 PM


Noah:  Friends are what it's all about.  Thank you.

Nancy:  If you keep enjoying them, I'll keep writing them...  for a while, at least.  

-MVS

"Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace

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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-12-16 08:42 PM




mmm.....a bit elusive!

when love disappoints you, you would count on the friendship that might reside beyond its boundries....

At times they say love is just another kind of friendship.....

Thank you I'm , too, back to my seat of enjoying these series....
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MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-12-16 11:55 PM


My Melody:  cryptic and suggestive, perhaps...  but elusive...?  Keep enjoying and I'll keep submitting...  

-MVS

"Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace

http://www.davidicke.com

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6 posted 2001-12-22 07:57 AM


i read this as a guy who was being a good buddy to his gal friend who was attracted to someone else..

yup, definitely suggestive..

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-12-22 11:10 AM


faterider:  interesting take -- could be quite accurate -- from both perspectives.

-MVS

"Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace

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