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CocoBaci
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0 posted 2001-12-16 03:43 AM



Propelled
unto the tides of pandemonium
Mounting
atop roaring white caps of passion
Suspended
purposeless devoid of essence
Drifting
weightless towards desolate shore
Thrusting
boldly hiding all fear
Tangled
ensnared no longer free
Spiraling
exhilaration collapsing at seams
Surrendered
imprisoned by his jealousy
The motive
lust
so it may seem
revealing
a simple truth
to me  
that one day
love
will embrace me...
*~coco~*

                     


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-16-2001).]

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timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2001-12-16 06:00 AM


(((HUGS)))

I really loved the poem,,,,but then the picture I loved equally as well.

Got a double smile with that one.

~TimothysAngel

*Whatever souls are made of...his and mine are of the same*  ~Emily Bronte'

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-12-16 10:32 AM


Beautifully descriptive Coco, and to be complimented by this lovely picture as well ... what a wonderful read, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2001-12-16 10:36 AM


What intensity of yearning displayed here dear Coco...A beautiful poem, as always, beautifully presented with a perfect graphic!
Love your style, lady!  

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-12-16 10:54 AM




(smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet CocoBaci! (big hugggssss) Love will find your golden heart, sweet friend, and you will forever after feel lifes joy as the wings of your heart spread to loves happiness! (sigh) Dreams can come true, sweet friend, always believe in your heart! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, your poem and the image are both sooooooooo breathtakingly beautiful! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet CocoBaci, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sodpossom
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5 posted 2001-12-16 11:09 AM


Great poem and beautiful picture!
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-12-16 11:31 AM


Coco, this is very, very passionate!!!!!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

CocoBaci
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7 posted 2001-12-16 02:51 PM


Tim, thank you very much for taking a peak at this poem and your kindess in reply means alot2me PoetFriend...

Kit, my heart hugzUsweetPoetFriend and I thank you for taking a moment to let me know you stopped by...

Serenity, my dearsweetGal it's sooooo nice2see you passed thru this page blue cuz I kinda was hoping I'd get a chance2see you here b4Christmas cuz you always make my heart smile...

Mistletoe, you are sooooooo kind dear Noah and I thank you from the bottom of my heart...

Possom, now thaz a cute lil name you got there PoetFriend, anyhow I'd like2say thank you2u for the sweet comments you made in your reply2me...

IrishRose, it's always a special treat2have you drop in here and leave me word of your impressions from a poem shared with all of you and I appreciate very much you having done so with lots of hugsNsmiles2u...

HaPPy HoliDays PoetFriends
*~coco~*

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-01-07 03:58 AM


Let us hope so...the embrace...James
CocoBaci
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9 posted 2002-01-07 12:37 PM


James my dearest PoetFriend, what can I say2u but ya just made me smile sweetie...

Thanx4stopping by on this one I had wrote a while back...

Muaah on cheekz2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

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