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amusemi
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0 posted 2001-12-15 11:51 PM


The Ways

I braid my hair, as is done...

On a gray day he passed away.
The man was tribe and white.
Family came in droves to the chapel-
Some pale, some in beads and deerskin hide.

Together we mixed memories and tales
And I thought of days in old,
Old ways, dying ways, maybe better ways.
Promises the great fathers had foretold.

Drifting to the smoke we pulled the billows
Drawing the haze over our hair,
Across our arms to cleanse the presence of the living,
Pungent, burning sweetgrass hung in the air.

Ancient flute lilted from overhead,
While, with the pipe and chant and dance
We wished his minor sins to the wind,
To his very last earthly romance.

So gently we sent him on his way.
A three day journey of final good-byes.
Knowing in our hearts and mind we could say anything,
Understanding, forgiveness we gave through sobbing sighs.

The ceremony healed in fluid feeling
For three days we all faced death and overcame
His passing became the birth of a powerful spirit
No longer an image, no longer a name.

We left him to fly in the sky
To rest in the pastures of buffalo.
Beauty, serenity, peace, simplicity
Oh what an exhilarating way to go.

I braid my hair, as it is done....


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-12-16 12:12 PM


This is stunningly beautiful. The message and your presentation are full of love and wisdom. Thank you for sharing this with me, I will save it and treasure it to re-read again another day.
I use to braid my hair when I was very  little...it was a golden corn color, and an aunt of mine said I looked like I was wearing corn tassles.

MrLeslie
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2 posted 2001-12-16 07:37 AM


Stunning! A great write that is a joy to read! Thanks for sharing!

Leslie de la Haye AKA Bald Eagle.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-12-16 08:24 AM



Thank you very, very much for sharing this...

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-12-16 08:45 AM


You've described this amazing ceremony in incredible detail amusemi, very much enjoyed this piece, thank you.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2001-12-16 11:34 AM




BRAVO!!! (big hugggsssssss) Both tears and joy fill these wonderful words! May peace, beauty, and simplicity always rest in his soul and may he forever guide his people with his love and hope. (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-12-16 11:44 AM


this is absolutely an awesome inspire...
what a very very cool write.
I will be sharing this with some special friends who I know will enjoy your words as much as I did.
Very well done!!

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
7 posted 2001-12-16 11:57 AM


Thank you for the praise and comments.   You are all so very wonderful here.  So much talent in one place...you are my daily miracles!!
Martie
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8 posted 2001-12-16 12:24 PM


This poem is full of the grace and wisdom of life and death..so naturally and fluently told.  Thank you for this amazing poem!
Logan
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9 posted 2001-12-16 02:54 PM


Fantastic. You have captured the essence of life and the passing, so beautifully..A very well done piece, look for many more...very gentle smile
Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2001-12-16 02:58 PM


Wow!!!!!!!!!!!
Unbelievably beautiful with gorgeous imagery.This is one terrific piece.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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