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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-12-15 06:45 PM




(This poem is based on a heartbreaking day in my life when I was 12 years old that my 11 year old cousin Teia (not 16) got raped, and she has never been her same self again, and up to today I always cry when I think of her. If I wanted only one thing for Christmas, it would be for her to be happy again and feel loved and special. :'(



Teia
By: Noah Eaton
5/2/01

Teia sits there on the rocking horse
Rocking with her soft gentle heartbeat
She smiles with such an innocence
Jumping up and down every time our families would meet
But I could see in the reflection of her eyes
That deep down in her there was some great sadness
And she’d share with me her broken hopes, she’d say
“You know, sometimes I just don’t feel anything!”

Please tell me she’s coming around
I can’t help but be scared now
Will she ever be the same again?
I hope she’s coming around

All summer long, I’d sit there on the tire swing
Waiting to hear rapture running through the back gate
To hear the squeaking door open out
And see her smile ever radiate
Waiting for hours only to realize
That she is not coming around
And when you hear that empty sound
My God, that is such an awful sound

Please tell me she’s coming around
I can’t help but be scared now
Will she ever be the same again?
I hope she’s coming around

Around the suburban block I would run
Trying to stop my storm of tears
How these sort of things leave me aching
How such things can change a gentle life forever
I am down on my hands and knees in the summer rain
Trying to collect the pieces of her shattered glass heart
Only coming to my senses that I can’t find them all
I can’t find them all…

Please tell me she’s coming around
I can’t help but be scared now
Will she ever be the same again?
I hope she’s coming around
Oh God, please tell me she’s coming around
I think I’m crying now
Please tell me she’s coming around
I think my heart has broken now…

Will you ever be saved...
Will you ever be healed?
I just wish I could help you
I just wish I could heal you
From this rape of innocence...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-15-2001).]

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-12-15 06:48 PM


What can I say to this? My words seem so meaningless. Your cousin will be in my prayers. I'm sure Teia appreciates your support, Noah. (hugs)  

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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2 posted 2001-12-15 07:11 PM


All we can do is pray to God to find the right means to help her.  I beleive he is the only answer to anything.  I hope she will come to realize this as she grows in wisdom.  Your writing was full of want.  I pray for you through God.  It is all I can do for you.  God Bless You and may your cousin find His healing power.  Roger


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3 posted 2001-12-15 07:15 PM


what can one say
the pain will never go away
but perhaps it will
with the passing of time
fade
if only a little
thank you
arthur

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4 posted 2001-12-15 08:45 PM


i have no idea what to say so i wont. that is so sad...
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5 posted 2001-12-15 08:49 PM


So sad, Noah...all anyone can do is hope and pray that maybe someday she will be able to see her way clear of this tragedy.
Your poem was beautiful!
  

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6 posted 2001-12-15 08:53 PM




I have no words.  Just that, Noah?   Please don't ever change who you are.
You ARE an angel.

Kathleen (Kay)
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7 posted 2001-12-15 09:06 PM


  ........there are no words Noah.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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