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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2001-12-15 05:01 PM


I took the words given me in the love of writing and formulated this dream of thought.

Oh blue water of the Caribbean
Oh how I love to glance my emotions off you
In the rhythmic intoxicating moves of my feelings
In rising tides you take me
To the special places
That hypnotizes me much like a therapist would
But the fingers you do it with
Melt into me in soothing swells
And the marine life swim around
In its total blessings
Of a dolphins speech
As she saw something quivering
In the delight, smile within

Oh mountain of my life how elusive you are
Oh how I must keep climbing
For the crest is always one step further
In my mind
And as the stones fall they are not replaced
But hands of gold weave their way up
A spec at a time
For in the reality of things worthwhile
You have to struggle
To put the right words to use
In order to explore upwards

In the ray of my sunshine
Lie in the clouds of doubt
For rainbows keep generating before me
In the spirit of selfish hopes
To fight opposite of the eclipse
To open me up with the ideas
That blossoms at all levels
That we choose to reside in

Oh World you are my playground
For the lure for far away places
Leads me on the ride of my life
Riding Unicorns of beauty
And in my space in time
You are my favorite planet to explore
My feeling with

So let me picture this into the photography
That lies within
To write the words that will take the seas
Into the mountain
Creating the waterfalls of delight
That will keep this poet peering
From his oxygen mask of needs

D.Lester Young (12/15/01)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)


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1 posted 2001-12-15 05:12 PM






BRAVO!!! Soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend! I have never seen the Carribbean Sea, but I dream of going there ever so much! (smiles) Your beautiful words send me to tip-toeing on the beach sands to flying over mountains! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet eagle, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-15 06:14 PM


*sigh* I have decided I love this world of yours that I see through your words. Stunningly magnificent. *sigh* I lost myself in its beauty. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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