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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-12-15 04:12 PM



My earth angel softly whispered
"Is he worthy of you my dear?"
and I listened with a heavy heart

an angel whispered "Oh! no.. no.. no"
"ride the waves of indecision
or you will drown in an ocean of tears"

you are there but here with me
a light wrapped around my soul
hugging me everywhere I roam
I see your tiny fingerprints
upon my golden comb
sometimes upon my windowpane
when I am all alone

an image of you combing your hair
beside the night light in my room
a silken strand of blonde hair
upon my pillow.. satin white
an earth angel is watching over me
from sunrise to moonlight

you are there but here with me
watching out for my destiny
my earth angel..my angel of love


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso



[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-15-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-15 04:20 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Victoria, the beauty of earthly angelic love shines in your lovely verse! (smiles) May your angel forever enfold you in his hearts wings forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-15 05:18 PM


Thank you Noah..for peeking in again today and for your sweet comments

                 ~Victoria~

Kethry
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3 posted 2001-12-15 06:45 PM


Victoria,
soft and sweet, beautiful images.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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4 posted 2001-12-15 06:49 PM


Oh this is simply beautiful. Very appropriate for Christmas.
Happy holidays
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-12-15 09:51 PM


Thank you kethry and Sandra..nice to hear from you both...happy holidays to you...hugss

                   ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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6 posted 2001-12-16 02:41 AM


Victoria,
What a cool use of the challenge. How come I didn't think of that? I really liked this. Nice touch!  

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7 posted 2001-12-16 10:05 AM


Thank you Larry..actually i wrote this the day before yesterday..and just added that one line in...i wasnt going to post it until i saw the challenge and i thought it fit the bill haa... Happy you enjoyed..

                     ~Victoria~

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