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misguided angel
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0 posted 2001-12-16 01:45 AM


How do you hold on to him,
mesmerize him with your charms?
Why is it that he sees you
when he holds me in his arms?

There was a time when you were
his angel, his darling wife.
My dearest wish is to be
his love, the light of his life.

I know you have the answers
and power over me, so
tell the secrets of his love
so in his heart I may be.
(Just a train of thought here guys, not a reality. Trying to express something but probably not very well.  
Andrea)

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

© Copyright 2001 Andrea - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-12-16 01:49 AM


Andrea,
Are you trying to live up to your misguided angel name, huh? LOL That is a difficult topic you chose, ya know.  

Siofra
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2 posted 2001-12-16 02:05 AM


I think you conveyed the thoughts of someone in this situation very well, actually.
enjoyed.  

I am many.

misguided angel
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3 posted 2001-12-16 02:40 AM


Larry, somehow I think I have already earned the misguided angel tag   And yeah I did discover it is a difficult topic.
Siofra, thanks for reading and understanding what I had to say.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

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4 posted 2001-12-19 03:36 PM


MisguidedAngel~
I thought you projected the situation very aptly~
Thanks for sharing doll !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Bec
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5 posted 2001-12-19 05:21 PM


misguided angel...

It is a difficult topic to write on, but I think you've succeeded! I really enjoyed this.

Bec

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6 posted 2001-12-19 05:30 PM


It makes sense to me, you wrote it well.
Best wishes,

RP

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7 posted 2001-12-19 05:31 PM


I agree with all above that you captured these feelings very well in this difficult topic.

Charisma

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