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Misadventures Of Me
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Misadventures Of Me |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Misadventures Of Me Lost and alone it seems buried by time forgot I travel through my dreams a worry I have not Fields of fresh green cut grass crumple at my feet walking where no one has never someone to meet Reciting magic spells to conjure up a friend instead forming wishing wells and wish time never end Candied flowers grow tall rainbows gleam from the sea someday my life may call ... misadventures of me Simple minded they say not to be very well if only the could play ... the stories they would tell! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the way your heart reaches out to everyone there is no way I would think of misadventures when it comes to you, dear one. You have shown the deep magic of love that fills your heart and soul spilling forth in rhyme time and again to flow into our hearts always leaving some of your very special magic behind. *sigh* you sure have me going with this one..the tales I could tell of the beauty of your heart and soul for you have blessed me with the touch of friendship you so freely give. **big hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Yes, your beautiful words always take us to worlds and on escapades of magic and love and friendship through your heart! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet Craig, this is sooooooo wonderful! I'm so happy that you are here! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MrLeslie Junior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 23Island of JERSEY, British Channel Isles UK |
SO! This is where you've been hiding eh? This is a wonderful piece of writing Craig buddy!Another gem from an ever growing artist! Well done! Leslie de la Haye AKA Bald Eagle. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"someday my life may call ... misadventures of me" I enjoyed the depth in this piece Craig, and loved the line copied above, nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Not exactly hiding Les... growing would fit. You will see for yourself that Passions carries its weight in gold. Thank you Kit ... I thought perhaps it sounded a bit too much like childsplay, then I realized that that was what I was trying to describe. Amazing how we forget how easy life can really be. **s Karen/Noah thank you always for your time and compassion. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig, I saw this long lonely walk and someone at the end of the path to make it less so. (I always see my own situation in your poems..can't help it) Did I say I love this?? Sandra |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Craig, I like this.. as usual Well done.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Craig- Wonderfully written piece. I really enjoyed reading this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi Craig! Your writing is getter better and better with each poem. Your poems are a delightful treat always. RosePetal |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I have walked that walk, in simple mind.....traveled through so many dreams, in hopes that time would give me time.....I still await to find that time.....keep writing, you speak your heart....it's refreshing to read....peace Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (12-23-2001 12:19 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Candied flowers grow tall rainbows gleam from the sea" IWIHWT That is a really cool line! I'm having a few glitchy problems with my email lately. Hope to send you a holiday card tomorrow. Tonight I'm so busy finishing off some White Zinfandel I may not get those cards done.  Candied flowers. YUM. I've made candied pansies before, they are both pretty and tasty. LOL, I need to run for a snack now. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nicely said..and when you'll least expect it..company will come :0 |
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