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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2001-12-15 01:12 PM



Time
for
Unity.

See
WE
not
ME.



May the ripple of LOVE
become the wave of PEACE

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 12-15-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-15 01:17 PM



BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS SHORT POEM SAYS SO MUCH, IT'S WONDERFUL!!! (big hugggsssss) I just know Mark will cherish this and love you forever! (sigh) Such a beautiful declaration of love, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-15 01:19 PM


BRAVO!!!!This is the perfect response to Mark. Very well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-15 01:33 PM


Noah and Startime, thank you!
The shortest written version would be:
             WE not ME.
If I could make the well-known international cancellation symbol, I would just put ME in a circle with that diagonal line through it.

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4 posted 2001-12-16 05:48 AM


Brilliant! this one gave me a gasp and a chuckle...
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5 posted 2001-12-16 06:03 AM


...or perhaps "I" with a slash through it...?  

Very cool, Kacy -- thank you for the thought.  The sentiment is one to consider, apply, and promulgate, to be sure.

-MVS

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6 posted 2001-12-17 09:43 AM


Or, as we say in the south (where our outhouses do NOT freeze) we'uns  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2001-12-17 10:14 AM


So much said for so little words.United we stand holding each other hand in hand.
Peaches

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8 posted 2001-12-17 12:20 PM


What a perfect poem as we stand together as a country!
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

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9 posted 2001-12-17 01:26 PM


Thank you everyone, for sharing this. It is a simple message we can all take to heart.

And Mark? I like that!  Nothing is shorter than "I" crossed out. Thanks for the inspiration. Now let's go "fight" some battles with that as our standard.

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10 posted 2001-12-17 11:55 PM


Kacy,
Ya' know for a yakker you sure have mastered brevity!  

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11 posted 2001-12-18 12:26 PM


Yakker? Yes, sometimes I can yak. Tonight I can't.  
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12 posted 2001-12-18 01:05 AM


I love brevity...and your message is perfect!
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13 posted 2001-12-18 02:25 AM


Thank you, Duncan. You always set a fine example, with the brevity of your work.  
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