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The Heart Is Calling
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The Heart Is Calling |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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The Heart Is Calling Soft as a whisper sound hardly noticed quiet reaching out The Heart Is Calling An audible sigh from trembling lips feelings without words The Heart Is Calling Flowing like music the caress of sound pleasing to the ear The Heart Is Calling Tenderly spoken filled with emotion as tears fall freely The Heart Is Calling Passion burning bright desire growing strong moans of need escape The Heart Is Calling Now building volume the message is sent let the words now speak The Heart Is Calling Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the heart is calling.... this is sooo pretty  I like the way this feels reads like a song |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Karen,I have to agree with Sea this does sound like a song  I think I`ll pick Rod Stewart or Bruce Springsteen to sing it.   Juanita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) YES, YES, SWEET LOVELY LYRICS WHISPER FROM YOUR LOVING HEART!!! (smiles) May the calling of your heart be heard to the ears of the most beautiful love of your dreams and come to make you happy forever! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime - the heart does call, in many different ways. And you have shown them in this writing... BC |
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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
Your heart flows within this. Cautious at first, but racing to its end. Tenderly spoken words. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~Flowing like music the caress of sound pleasing to the ear The Heart Is Calling Tenderly spoken filled with emotion as tears fall freely The Heart Is Calling~ what a wonderful gem, so tenderly written....love it love it all ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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MrLeslie Junior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 23Island of JERSEY, British Channel Isles UK |
A wonderful and new poem my darling Star* No need for your heart to call, your heart and mine are already entwined |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Startime this is a beautiful expression of the desires of the heart. James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
SEA...WOW!!!What a compliment. I have always wanted one of my poems to sing. I am so glad this one does for you. **hugs**  North Carolina Girl...I feel doubly blessed that you find this poem worthy of such praise. **hugs** Noah..you are just too adorable. **hugs**  Bill...I always love to see your comments they tell me that I have done well and that pleases me. **hugs** shadowed_innersense...I don't know if my heart understands caution but my words try too. **hugs** Chrisma...*grin* and I love you dear lady...I am so glad you like it. **hugs** Sweet Les...so glad to have you here...I am going to love seeing your work light up these blue pages. So keep visiting us from across the pond, dear one. **hugs** James...dear man...you always know the words to say to put a smile on my face. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...so beautifully written....Someone will sing this for you...I am sure they will. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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