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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-15 11:30 AM


Give me but a microsecond of your life.
For..in that time you will know, will feel.
You will experience the great warmth.
You will be within the softest place.

Like a message at the speed of light.
The whisk of a comet through space.
A meteor hurtling toward earth.
Love will enter you, will ever remain.

This tiny moment, just a small dot
will become your life’s joy, fulfill you.
Your needs will wane, will not again be.
Two hearts will share, become as one.

Like Cupid...my bow is strung..waits.
The arrow of love ever sharp and true.
This man’s thoughts bide here inside
for my target is just you...only you..

[This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 12-15-2001).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-12-15 11:39 AM


I think you have become the resident romantic  

*SIGH* this is wonderful!!  

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-15 11:43 AM


*sigh* I totally agree with Sea...Your romantic words from a loving heart make all the hearts here swoon with longing. Reading this poem is the most perfect way for me to start my day. **hugs**


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-15-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-12-15 02:08 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (sigh) That's what's the most beautiful magic of love is; it can happen in the blink of an eye and it can happen when you least expect it, to strike your heart with joy forever! (big hugggssssss) Love again shines from your heart and graces these blue pages, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-15 02:18 PM


Now, you know Barry, I like you very much.  Do you also know this is refreshing to read after facing a mob at the shopping mall!!  Well, everything will be wrapped later but this is so wonderful to read.  For some reason, I feel new hope today and I haven't felt that in a long time.  It's good to read someone's words knowing that they have love in their heart for those in their life and put it into such beautiful poetry for everyone to share.  Forgive me for rambling, I often do that.....rambling rose and all you know?



Kathleen (Kay)
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5 posted 2001-12-15 03:28 PM


Wonderful Barry!  After a day of wrapping this is nice and relaxing....and life is as I always say, 'over in the blink of an eye'.
Well done....Mr Romance!  ~Hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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6 posted 2001-12-15 03:34 PM


Like this...James
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2001-12-15 03:53 PM




"for my target is just you...only you.."

And what a target..!!

Such a wonderful piece ....
I really loved it....

Thank you
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8 posted 2001-12-15 08:11 PM


Sue...thankx mucho...I do thoroughly enjoy
writing romance...Resident Romantic?  
I am not sure about that ...there are some
pretty good ones here..

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9 posted 2001-12-15 08:17 PM


Karen...are you and Sue collaborating together?

I am glad you girls are enjoying this..

Tis fun...  

thanx bunches..

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10 posted 2001-12-15 08:18 PM


Noah...thanx again for your ever faithful
and warm responses.

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11 posted 2001-12-15 08:20 PM


Kay...you are not rambling...just expressing
wonderful feelings...

IF I can give you that feeling of hope and
warmth...I will write until I die to allow
you and others to have that....

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12 posted 2001-12-15 08:43 PM


Gosh Nancy...do I ever write anything that
you don't sigh over?   Maybe I should try
so that you can have a normal day....

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13 posted 2001-12-15 08:44 PM


JM...thank you much...you always respond
favorably...

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14 posted 2001-12-15 08:45 PM


My Enchanted...I wish I knew your name...or
could remember it...

Thank you very much for your warm reply...
Makes my heart feel good..

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15 posted 2001-12-15 08:52 PM


So romantic, Barry and so very well written.
            

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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16 posted 2001-12-16 09:27 AM


Thanx much Madam C....happy you enjoyed this
little post...

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