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ecrivan
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0 posted 2001-12-15 01:34 AM


When Antiochus burnt the Hebrew temple down
to a system of idolatry, the conquered frowned;
resisters would guard their beliefs in One
defending the Macabee mount they left their sons.

Candles burn strong until they are eight
the macabeans were tough to retaliate;
a people who resisted Hellenistic expansion
with a waning patience to enter strange mansions.

Answers to their prayers at the temple did occur
when lamp oil was low and none could be procured;
God said burn this that will last more than a day
to symbolize that my presence is here to stay.


Today on the menorah we light candles eight
to remember burning the oil, years of late;
to symbolize His presence in the face of fate
Hebrews would soon send the Syrians to their gate.



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (edited 12-15-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-15 01:41 AM


This is quite beautiful. I remember lighting the menorah for friends while I lived on a kibbutz in Israel. We shared stories, songs, and Blackberry wine. And many of us climbed Mount Masada together that year. So many memories. And so many tears for what is happening today.
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2 posted 2001-12-15 04:48 PM


Thank you for sharing this with us. In learning about other cultures, we can only grow and hopefully gain understanding of each other that will lead to peace in this world.  
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3 posted 2001-12-15 04:54 PM



BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Yes, may this tradition forever be remembered and may these candles forever light in dedication to His loving presence! BRAVO!!! We all love you so much, dearest friend, and have the happiest holidays! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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4 posted 2001-12-15 06:10 PM





Thanks for the replies, I do like to write about other cultures too that I have lived in and learnt things from as an international
personality...share that with those that are less fortunate and cannot travel and those who would like to know more about the world.




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5 posted 2001-12-15 06:38 PM


Martin,
it's nice to see the spirit of Hannukah lives on and the legend is passed on.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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6 posted 2001-12-15 09:18 PM


Martin....A wonderful history lesson turned into a beautiful poem.
Happy Chanukah to you also!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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7 posted 2001-12-15 09:38 PM


Thank you for doing this not only because of Hannakah, but for its understanding.  Extremely well done.  I wish all those celebrating Hannakah a wonderful hoiday, filled with love, family and friends.

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ecrivan
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8 posted 2001-12-16 04:35 PM


It gives me a chance to say "I like to show
different roots and this is how my holiday started thousands of years ago".Thanx for your good wishes.


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