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Braided Rhymes
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Braided Rhymes |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Braided Rhymes he sat behind and brushed my hair a hundred times once again entwined touch and words are braided rhymes as he brushed the length slowly gently kissing the ends silken strings can be my strength tenderly in the hands of friends "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* to me it is very sensual and erotic to have a man brush my hair...that is what I felt with this poem. Very well written. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is precious... Hugs2uSweetPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
I think one of the most soothing feelings in the world is that of when someone is stroking or brushing my hair. It just feels so wonderfully comforting. Thanks for sharing this one  .~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (smiles) I think caressing the hair of a lover is one of the most loveliest feelings of all, feeling the softness and the smile on a lovers face! (smiles) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - many of your writings are most tenderly written, as this one is... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ This evokes some fond memories~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I really liked this alot. Sometimes being touched can be so incredible. This peice is very soothing to read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...I love someone to brush my hair too...especially that 'certain someone.' ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
this left me with a nice feeling, thank you! Carol Luna |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
neat interplay of soothing touch to the hair and love. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
not much feels better.... very smooth |
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