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They Fail To Remember
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They Fail To Remember |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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They Fail To Remember Yes the year almost over My heart took a dive Drowning in despair Pulse tells me I’m alive It continues the beating Would you ever care Here below surface Aches beyond repair Those jolly jingle bells Food , gifts and drink Where is the true love Do you stop and think In a melancholy mood Christmas feeling blue Having been forgotten I will be thinking of you Another year flows by Sadness of December People much to busy They fail to remember Hope ©2001 |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Of all times of year this is often the hardest to bare, we are reminded constantly of family and loved ones, when those things are absent from our lives it makes it that much harder. I think we can all identify with your words at some point in our lives and this a powerful write. Be well and safe and all the very best to you. Regards, Olias. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad these thoughts are, sweet Hope, I feel we can all relate to them! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you and hope that you'll have the happiest holidays and replace those tears with one of comfort. (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is so true.. sad but true...your rhyme is good here, so is your meter. strbbux  |
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