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Writer’s Challenge: from the lady
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Writer’s Challenge: from the lady |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Sing me a song in a sonnet so sweet, A tune that plays deep in the heart of me Lyrics to reach so close that we will meet And set us both so our spirits are free. Draw me a hope on the open blue sky, Where all the dreams will be easy to hold, Let me look on the clouds drifting on by, To the writing written so high and bold. Dance on the stage of my old memories Swirl me and twirl me around in your arms, Let me get lost in your sweet fantasies, Take me away and waltz me with your charms. You are there, here with me please me and stay, Don’t go taking my dreams walking away. Bill |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I floated away as I read this beautiful sonnet. You took me into the dream world I love so much. It is filled with love and tenderness there. Thank you, sweet man. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Son, you truly are a master at lovely sonnets, this is soooooooo lovely! (sigh) May she forever hold your dreams just as you will forever embrace hers! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may love forever shine in your golden heart! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's lovely, personally I'm not up for a challenge right now, but I love what you did with this one  Kathleen (Kay) |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Startime, A delight to float you along, dreaming is what makes us romantics. Noah, You are always so generous with your praise, There are many others around here that write better than I, I just hope to pick up a little. It your praise that keeps me striving. Kay, Just fourteen little lines, open your heart and out they flow. I was glad for the challenge it’s accepting challenges that lets us grow. Bill |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Bill, I came back for another read, well maybe fourteen lines? I don't know, writing seems to be in my blood though. I do love sonnets....love them! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
I really cant think of anything to say that hasnt been said. Good job. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful, and oh so romantic.....this one waltzed me off into the night.... ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Kay, Look as often as you like, that this is rereadable is compliment indeed, I love sonnet because of the nature of them, short and sweet, beauty of form. Zukene-chic, Sometime it’s not what you say, but the look you give. Martie, thanks Enchantress, It’s so nice when a feeling does that, I wish I could dance better, but with the right partner no one even notices me. Bill |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Son, I think Lady will be quite pleased with this effort....in fact, I know she will! It's been marvelous to see so many poets take this on... kinda like a snowball in December... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Son Netier- Wonderfully penned...love it. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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