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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-14 02:33 PM


I Dare To Believe

Gentle, sweet caress,
giving tenderness
Understanding eyes,
heart released it flies

Over distance far,
wishing on a star
Open are two hearts,
lovers dance now starts

Hope that never ends,
heart felt love it sends
Dream of love’s delights
of passion shared nights

Strong arms holding near,
true love without fear
Dream of love I weave,
I dare to believe

It is fantasy,
sad is reality
God will bless someday,
love sent me, His way

Karen Torbiak©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-12-14 02:39 PM


It is fantasy,
sad is reality
God will bless someday,
love sent me, His way
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yes Karen, and I wish these things for you as well.  Good write as always!
*Happy Holidays*
~Hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Krawdad
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2 posted 2001-12-14 03:10 PM


And believe you must!
Enjoyed this.
Like the way it flows.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-12-14 04:52 PM




(sigh) And I know with all my heart that very soon you will be embraced by the most beautiful love of your dreams, and you will be happy with him forever! (sigh) Believe in your heart always, for dreams can come true, for you are the Dream Weaver, and a shining star to Him. (big hugggssssss) I wish this dream to come true for you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

EagleOne
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4 posted 2001-12-14 05:28 PM


Keep the dream my friend!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Magnus
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5 posted 2001-12-14 06:20 PM


Karen...you are certainly inspired...your
sensual and romantic words are a wonderful
soothing feel to my eyes...much enjoy your
poetry...

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-12-14 07:01 PM


You just go right ahead and believe, sweetheart, there's nothing wrong in believing and don't forget it.  You're poetry is alive and special and so are you.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Zukene_Chic
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7 posted 2001-12-14 07:48 PM


"it is fantasy
sad is reality"

  Amazing.

jwesley
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8 posted 2001-12-14 07:53 PM


Yep...hang on to the dream...enjoyed this much.

jwesley

Robert William Gruhn
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9 posted 2001-12-14 08:01 PM


My dearest sweet Lady Karen and wonderful friend and confidant, your beauty is only exceeded by your kindness and loving spirit, just know that I thank God each and every day for your true friendship, it is and continues to be so very precious to me! Your knight and poet always and forever! Love, Sir Robert


Startime
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10 posted 2001-12-14 08:15 PM


Nancy...*grin* well I am hoping I have been good enough this year for Santa to bring me my fantasy. I am so glad you liked it. **hugs**

Krawdad...*giggling* I don't think I have the ability to stop believing...maybe someday my dream will come true. I am glad you liked the way it flowed. **hugs**

Noah...you are such a dear...I wish the very same for you and I know that your dreams will come true. **hugs**

EagleOne...what would you and I do without our dreams, dear one? So very good to hear from you. **special hugs**

Magnus...It is the season....I seem to be filled with joy and love....Thank you, I am so happy you liked it. **hugs**

Irish Rose...I promise not to forget it...and with someone like you and your beautiful poems to keep me believing in magic I will have no worry of forgetting it. **big hugs**

Zukene_Chic... thank you, I am glad you liked it. **hugs**

jwesley...I will hold tight to my dreams and who knows what the future will hold. I am glad you liked it. **hugs**

Sir Robert...This lady bows graciously to your warm and loving compliment. Thank you, so much, my friend. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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11 posted 2001-12-15 09:47 PM


*catching up* - and I am sure glad this didn't slip away from me before I read it.  I believe in dreams, and miracles - so of course I absolutely loved this.  Hold onto your dreams and one day they will become reality.

~*~  May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~


Chanson
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12 posted 2001-12-15 09:51 PM


These are touching couplets,
very nicely expressed. *s

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
13 posted 2001-12-15 10:18 PM


You have captured the beauty of two and the hopeful dance of an open heart.  Great share!  Thankyou...
Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee
14 posted 2001-12-15 11:17 PM


What a beautiful write!  And, boy, can I relate.  
JamesMichael
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15 posted 2001-12-17 05:59 AM


This is lovely writing Startime...James
rwood
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16 posted 2001-12-17 06:57 AM


I hope you always dare to believe Karen. With verse like this..you are certainly going to polish someone's star! Lovely!!!

Love, Peace and Joy

Sincerely,
Regina

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
17 posted 2001-12-17 07:03 AM


I agree Karen
on dreams the only way to fly
as so often reality can make one cry
Hope
"keep spreading those wings
where your heart sings

BloomingRose
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Florida
18 posted 2001-12-17 07:28 AM


Karen... always dare to believe.
Enjoyed.

Deb

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