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thepoeticplumber
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0 posted 2001-12-14 10:44 PM


The Angels fly so high
While demons slither by

Your choice should be of light
Not darkness in the night

Let heaven be your goal
For hell will grill your soul

Your God will fill your heart
The Devil tears apart

Use love to fill your day
Leave evil to decay

There is but one good choice
Amen should sooth your voice


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1 posted 2001-12-14 10:49 PM




(big hugggssssss) Yes, yes, may we all wave our hands to His embrace and spread our hearts wings to His loving voice. (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-14 11:18 PM


So good to see you moved over to Passions and welcome (remember me from Starlite?)   I know you are going to really enjoy this forum and the wonderful people in it as well.  Again, welcome and also Merry Christmas across the sea to you.

~*~  May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~


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3 posted 2001-12-14 11:51 PM


BRAVO!!!!!How true...how very true...this is wonderful writing......and said so very well...Oh I am very impressed. Well done. Very well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-12-15 09:28 AM


Hi PoeticPlumber,

This has a great message and I think music could go with it as well, I just read something in this reguards about there being really only one choise, enjoyed thank you.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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5 posted 2001-12-15 10:06 AM


Ah yes - Good over evil... a universal theme done beautifully... Nice work, plumber..
thepoeticplumber
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6 posted 2001-12-15 11:17 AM


Thank you all for the comments.  I am sure in the end good will conquer over evil.  Roger


Bill Charles
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7 posted 2001-12-15 01:45 PM


thepoeticplumber - your words are so very true. I wonder why some always seem to look at the evil side instead of good. Nice write...

BC

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