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amerijuanican
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0 posted 2001-12-14 12:40 PM


Split my heart in two
                   would you?
So I can peek inside
And sweep out all the doubts, the pains
                                and my darkest
                                          corner
                                              Pride.

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1 posted 2001-12-14 02:58 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my, I know just how you feel, and I'm sure we all wish we can take out all your pains in you, but while pride is sometimes considered a sin, I believe as far as believing in yourself and your dreams, pride is a beautiful thing, and you must always use it! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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