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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-12-14 11:05 AM



My love for him is like
the perfect harmony
between the wind and the lingering
rustle of the leaves
His love for me is like
the leaves pile up in corners
then disappear
rebelling against the wind
as it blows
and come back again in bundles
to fight the wind

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-14 11:10 AM


*sigh* there is a deep inner sadness in his love in that it fights the gentle winds of yours. My heart goes out to you. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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2 posted 2001-12-14 01:18 PM


Your aim held true with this one, walker!
Robert A
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since 2001-10-29
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3 posted 2001-12-14 02:49 PM


enjoyed but such a sad write.
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4 posted 2001-12-14 02:51 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Walker, my heart cries out to you and your sorrow! (sigh) I pray that his love can sweep you off your feet like the wind and carry you like a magic carpet ride eternally into paradise! (kiss on cheek) My heart is with you always, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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