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2dalimit
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0 posted 2001-12-14 09:24 AM



"You are there, here with Me"

We’ve made it over thirty years now.
I know the reason. Do you know how?
There’s only one answer that I can see.
"You are there, here with Me".

Each year I love you more, to this I cannot lie.
Each year my love grows beyond the day I die.
Our love started when the stars shined bright.
I’ll always remember that beautiful night.

We made a bet, on rain, to see who would miss.
We each fell in love. We both won the kiss.
With a bet like that, how could either lose.
On that night you became my muse.

We made our vows so all could see.
Yes, You are there, here with Me.
I'll always be your man and you my wife.
It’s forever and a day, not just this life.


© Copyright 2001 Melton Culberth - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-12-14 09:34 AM


what a romantic way to meet this challenge... I think this is lovely  
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2 posted 2001-12-14 09:44 AM


A challenge well met  

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3 posted 2001-12-14 09:57 AM



Ah yes, a challenge very well met, and you HAVE shared this with yours, yes?  What?  No?  Do!  Lady will approve!

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4 posted 2001-12-14 09:58 AM


This is so romantic.
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5 posted 2001-12-14 10:38 AM



I so approve!  I also second the Motion that this should be tucked into your wife's Christmas stocking...what a lovely way to wish her Merry Christmas...

Startime
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6 posted 2001-12-14 10:50 AM


*sigh* true romance that stands the test of time. Wonderful!! I love it. **hugs** Perfect for the challenge.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2001-12-14 10:54 PM


This is wonderful. Thank you for writing it.
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8 posted 2001-12-14 11:26 PM


2dalimit,
It's gotta be love. Thirty years! Wow! Romance does work...

2dalimit
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9 posted 2001-12-15 09:41 PM


SEA… Thank you. It means a lot coming from you.

Interloper… Thank you. I am honored by your comment.

Sunshine… Thanks. I share every thing with my love.

SmartChick… Thanks. We do have a romantic relationship.

Lady W… Thank you. Your challenge was well worth the effort and she already knows how I feel.

StarT… Thanks. Forever and a day has been what we live for.

inot… Thanks. We got it.

Larry C… Yes. It’s actually 31 ½ years on Christmas Day.

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