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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 12-14-2001 08:51 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel

Trouble
By: Noah Eaton
12/14/01

Am I trouble to all of you?
Am I just a nuisance?
Am I a fool without a clue?
Do you think I’m stupid?

I never meant to do anyone wrong
I never meant to cause trouble
I just want to speak friendship’s song
Or is my heart just fuddled?

Should I ever open my mouth again?
Would I only misunderstand?
Do I deserve to be loved?
Should I detach from this circle of hands?

Am I just a stupid thing?
For all I’ve ever wanted to be
Is your friend and sunshine
Just as you are to me…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-14-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Lisping Hibiscus - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-14-2001 09:38 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Oh Noah, who has made you so sad? You are such a bright spot in my day....I hope you never leave here....you are gentle and sweet and i look forward to your poetry and your replies, not just to mine, but to everyone's.Here....(((hugs))) to you  
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2 posted 12-14-2001 09:46 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel

(big hugggssss) Oh thank you so much, sweet Susan, for your beautiful reply. I felt like writing this poem after reading a response to anothers poem to a comment I made with the smileys I always use that I think made the poet upset, and I couldn't help but think if I was a bad influence to you and everyone else here too. (sigh) I never meant to make anyone feel upset, for I love everyone here so much and only use smileys as a sign of affection and friendship, nothing more. (big hugggssssss) Thank you so much, sweet friend, you are such a wonderful friend to me as are many others here!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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3 posted 12-14-2001 10:12 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Noah, don't let anyone and I mean ANYONE stop you from being you!! You are always soooo nice and so sweet. It really hurts my heart that anyone would even remotely want to be negative at you! Keep smiling Noah.....never change who you are  
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4 posted 12-14-2001 12:22 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

Awww Noah, who made you so sad? You are no trouble at all. And, you are definitely no nuisance. You always brighten up my day. Don't you dare leave.  
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5 posted 12-14-2001 12:25 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Noah, they've put up with me and i've been more trouble than most!!  You certainly are not.  Can I say something?  I think it takes a lot of courage to splash your feelings out here like this, but honey, it takes a toll.
Be gentle with yourself, don't worry about what anyone thinks, just write, reply in kind and be peaceful. That's all that matters. It really is.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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6 posted 12-14-2001 12:31 PM       View Profile for Rogue24   Email Rogue24   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rogue24's Home Page   View IP for Rogue24

Noah: You should never feel sorry for who you are, I am new here and you all embraced me sometimes warmer than most r/l friends and family, and for that I truly adore each and every person I have gotten to know here.
Dont EVER change, I was troubled by the remark that was harshly given to you as well, and for that I couldnt help but comment through my write (A Cyber Affair)

Please take comfort knowing people around you like you for you and never want you to change your warmth in your heart.

Hugs
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

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7 posted 12-14-2001 12:41 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Noah, you are a good, kind, decent person. You embody the spirit of this poetry site. If your comments lean toward a little over-exuberance at times, you do it in the spirit of friendship and love for all with no ulterior motives. Please don't change. You are a good man with a heart the size of my ex-wife's mouth!   There are many here who appreciate you...I am one.  
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8 posted 12-14-2001 12:54 PM       View Profile for Rogue24   Email Rogue24   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rogue24's Home Page   View IP for Rogue24

Balladeer your life was graced (cursed) with a blow horn too eh? LOL, makes a man want to dig out his ear drums. hehe  

*leaves still laffing*
Cheers
Ter

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

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Noah, you are such a kind soul.  Sometimes even people like me, who tend to laugh loud, get trampled on to "be quiet".  So I go around, whispering laughter....

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keep saying that and you'll start believing it, don't be so hard on yourself, it's only a poetry site!
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You are someone I've come to appreciate a great deal Noah, and you are most certainly a part of this circle of friends.  

Best wishes and big hugs,
/Kit
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12 posted 12-14-2001 02:57 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

Noah, I didn't see the remark but please do not let anyone bother you. Your symbols are the smilies....I love them. It is how you respond. We each have our own way. You embrace us all in your unique kind of way. Do not let one person get to you. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Noah...I agree totally with what Balladeer
said...You are a young man...the way you
reply sometimes makes some people feel you
are overly responsive....too flowery...but
they just don't know that you are who you
are....and that is how you are...IT IS OK..

We all feel you write beautifully.  For
your age...you write exceptionally..

Spend less time worrying about what people
might think of you...think more of the gift
that you have...and I think most of us
understand that you are a very warm and
genuine young man...  That has never been
doubted by me...  

Temper your replies a little bit...less
flowery maybe...but don't stop giving the
heartfelt thoughts you have...they are
appreciated...

You are appreciated too.
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14 posted 12-14-2001 04:21 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Noah,


    No matter what anyone says to you or writes to you.. you are a wonderful and sweet person.  Don't listen to them.. pay no mind. I've seen the reply you talked about.. and I'm sorry people have to be that way. *hugs* to you my friend.  You are an amazing writer with even more of an amazing heart. Please remember that always.  

Hugs,
Tara

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     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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Noah...WHO MADE YOU UPSET?
You are not a nuisance! You are an inspiration here! I can see how sad you are, and let me just tell you how wonderfully uplifting your presence is. Thank you, my friend for reading my work and being such a wonderful supporter here. No one could replace you! If you need to talk I have ICQ.
          

MERRY CHRISTMAS, DARLINGS....
If you can't find your cup of Christmas cheer, you may have a cup of mine!

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Hi Noah!

In a couple of days, you'll reach your one year anniversary with Passions in Poetry. Congratulations!!!

I know when I see your name on a reply that you are going to (hug) and (kiss) me...sometimes that's all I need to make my day a bit brighter. Sometimes, I get a warm smile because I know that in giving such love to all of us here, you are also gaining our love and respect. You are a dear, sweet, kind person. Don't be upset. Reply with the same sweet sincerity that you always do...I for one enjoy it!!!    
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We all love you, Noah  

Just wanted to make sure you knew that.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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Wow, that shows how a lot of people feel a LOT of the time. *Huggles* WE LOVE YOU!!! Dont feel sad!!!!
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(((warm hugs)))) don't feel sad, and I for me like the way you reply.....because it is soooo YOU...and that's the way I like you my friend. So don't even think about leaving hon.....'cause you are one of this family  

((Hugs)))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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Ahhh Noah!  Who hurt your feelings hon?
Don't you listen to them, and you know we all love you!  You are always one of the first to respond to others posts and always have wonderful comments to make that writer feel good.  You always bring a smile to my face no matter how I am feeling.  You say and do what you feel Noah!  Don't go changing to try to please them...I love you just the way you are....
~Hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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Dearest Noah,

Your heart..is a masterpiece. I will never forget the art you share with me and others in your giving and encouragement. I more than enjoy your comments. I am inspired by them.

Gentle Hugs and Love.

Always
Regina
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22 posted 12-16-2001 01:18 PM       View Profile for Dulcinea   Email Dulcinea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dulcinea

If friendship offered in love is trouble, then I hope I stay in it to the knees...no, never change...you do add a lot of smiles to these pages!  
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Ditto!!!!!  I am so greatful that you are here!!  You made me feel welcome and appreciated , validated and loved.  I was afraid to post at first, but it was great to know that no matter what I botch and blot here... you will always say it's okay.  You are my hero!!!!
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Noah...I would like to echo what everyone else said because I simply cannot think of any other words to add...
but I am very sorry that someone hurt you.
You have always been extremely generous and kind to me...and I really have come to enjoy your beautiful graphics.
Please don't cry.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

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