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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-12-14 04:25 AM


You Are There, Here With Me

You are there, here with me
Walking hand in hand
Alongside the sea
Footsteps in the sand

You are there, here with me
Opening up hearts gate
To flow endlessly
Secret desires we sate

You are there, here with me
On every star that shone
Flying on melodies
Love light leads me on

You are there, here with me
Sensuous loving kind
Every dream created
Are forever on my mind

You are there, here with me
Earth, wind and fire
For now until eternity
You are my hearts desire

Hope © 2001

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1 posted 2001-12-14 08:22 AM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Hope, your lovely words reflect the challenge so heavenly! (sigh) Sweet love will forever sing in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-14 09:42 AM


this is beautiful, I like the flow and rhyme, very nice  
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3 posted 2001-12-14 09:42 AM



Hope, this is a lovely response to Lady's challenge.  I'll bet she'll enjoy this when she gets back!  Good for you!

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4 posted 2001-12-14 10:42 AM



What is most wonderful about a little challenge is that we get to see so many styles of poetry come through.  This is charming, and I am so glad you joined in!  Thank you1

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5 posted 2001-12-14 10:47 AM


*sigh* stunning. You did a magnificent job with the challenge, Hope. Romance flows from every word. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

HopeS
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6 posted 2001-12-14 10:51 AM


Noah , hugs reaching over to you , kiss and a huge thank you !!!
Hope

HopeS
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7 posted 2001-12-14 10:52 AM


Thanks Sea for your sweet comment
much appreciated
Hope

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8 posted 2001-12-14 10:53 AM


Sunshine , I'm so pleased you enjoyed, thanks for your reply
Hope

HopeS
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9 posted 2001-12-14 10:55 AM


Thanks Lady W, I am so pleased you enjoyed ,
I enjoyed the challenge , it brings all our thoughts together
Hope

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10 posted 2001-12-14 10:57 AM


Thanks Karen for your sweet kind reply ,
yes I agree when romance grows
the heart truly flows
Hope

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