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If Into Tomorrow ... Marge and Bill

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Marge Tindal
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If Into Tomorrow
~*Marge Tindal*~ and ~Bill Haight~


If into tomorrow
I could take one memory of yesterday
I'd take the look as your eyes searched my soul
when I heard you softly say ...

'You are all I need or want - You make me whole'

Sweet, sweet words, they are like music
a symphony of inspiration to this tattered soul
More and more I long for you every moment

'I've given you my heart to hold'

You touch me so very caringly
wrapping my heart in tenderest melt
I want to be in all of your tomorrows

'No greater love have I ever known or felt'

You really do light up my life
You have taken my heart
As long as I have you by my side

'Our hearts will never, ever part'


~Two hearts joined in One 'Big Love'~
December 13, 2001

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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1 posted 12-13-2001 11:05 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

ohhhh boy this ones gettin lots of replies i can just sense it!! You know, it really changes the feeling of the poem when it is collaboratively written by two people, and two people in love, nonetheless! (if im not mistaken)
This is fastastica, no other poem written by a single person could surpass it
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Marge & Bill-
   OH...I think you know how much I love this!
   It's soooooooo good to see your love growing,
   and I feel privileged to be a witness to it.
   This makes me sooooooo happy, I think
   my heart is going to burst with joy for you!
   Love and hugs to you both,
   ~Vicky


  

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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Marge and Bill...very well written...such
love...you both have penned it perfectly..
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The two of you have made my heart smile tonight..thank you for sharing the joy!  Hugs and love!!
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Fantastic writing...James
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What great writing Marge and Bill.
Peaches
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EagleScorpion~
We thank you so much - you are definitely not mistaken~

Vicky~
We BOTH just love you to pieces~
When Bill got me, he got you in the package of my heart~
My love and thanks for each prayer of love and just for being YOU ... always there ... always a friend~  

Magnus~
We thank you very much~

MartieSis~
And we smile right back at you, sweetie~
Thanks ... always~

JamesMichael~
Thank you very much friend~

Peaches~
We appreciate knowing you enjoyed it~
We enjoyed sharing this love with others~
*Hugs*
~*Marge and Bill*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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*sigh* Romance....how absolutely stunning. Your love for each other flows together in these words that leave me sighing. MAGNIFICENT!!! I love it!!!! I love that love is flowing in your hearts for each other. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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This is just beautiful, Marge and Bill! Your love for each other really does show. Thank you for sharing this.
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But how can you love a man named hate? Oh! HAIGHT!! That's ok, then  
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When two are so content that they can finish each others thoughts and speak each others hearts then it could only be pure poetry in motion.
This is a heart-smile.  
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This will surely be my favorite poem of the day, and I just started reading! Love makes even the coldest dreeriest days feel like a warm cozy blankie.
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Ah Marge and Bill!  This is wonderful!
I am so happy for the two of you....
and as a bonus....you write beautifully together!  
What more could you ask?
Hugs,   Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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Ah some day, White Feather, you must tell me the story, for it is a wide and open path the both of you trod.  I wish you both well, for it is quite apparent, happiness is a given...
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Words fail me... so I'll just sit here smiling as I enjoy. *S* The two of you create beautiful poetry... *S*
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(smiles) BRAVO!!! OH MARGE, THIS IS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) May your love forever shine into tomorrow with joy! (sigh) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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what a splendid write Marge and Bill.....enjoyed it very....very much  

((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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Awwww, I just love it!  You guy's!!!

jwesley
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That was wonderul. I love it!
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StarTime~
Thank you so very much~

SmartChick~
I appreciate you letting us share with you~

Balladeer~
It's the easiest thing I've ever done~

JanetMarie~
Thanks hon~

MidniteSun~
Thank you for letting us be your 'blankie'.

Enchantress~
I thank you .. we appreciate the reply~

Karilea~
A path of certainty we have joined our hearts upon~
Thank you sweet lady~

SuthernGal~
You know that I apprecite YOU~
*HUGS*

----

Charisma~
Thank you so much~

JWesley~
Awwww, we thank you~

ZukeneChic~
Appreciate the read and reply~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous.

Without doubt darling girl YOU are glowing, I know you two will be exceedingly happy. Congratulations both of you, I know just how wonderful love makes you feel.
This is written as if you were actually wrting with each others hearts, so you must be.
Fabulous writing, I'm as happy as a grig for you. If ever there was someone who deserved real love 'tis you. Bill you are a very lucky man But I know you knows that.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

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Marge & Bill,
I heard the loudest heart throb coming from my computer. I hunted and hunted and I think I found the source. Wow!
Marge Tindal
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MarshaLove~

'This is written as if you were actually writing with each others hearts'
EXACTLY ... thank you darling girl~
I love ya'

Larry~
Why thank you very much~
We appreciate that~
~*Marge & Bill*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com   

Marge Tindal
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We are both sitting here reading our expressions of love~

Maybe we'll just have to do another one TOGETHER !

Ya' think ?

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~ & Bill~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com     

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