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Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

0 posted 2001-12-13 10:50 PM

Defeating the Clouds
by Randy Meador

The dark days,
The cloudy sky,
The raing pummeling my head,
Are no longer present
You entered my suddenly dark life
Defeating these dark clouds and rain
To shower me in nothing but happiness and joy
You give me my light
Keep these dark days out of my sight

The beautiful flowers onpen up to your light
light that surpasses through the deep blue skies
Forever I wish to live this life
Feeling like a king, you as my georgeous queen
In return, I give you
my care,
my love,
and most important my heart
A heart which beats just for you
The one who gave me my light

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2001-12-13 10:53 PM

BEAUTIFUL....THIS IS A WONDEROUSLY BEUTARIFFIC PIECE OF SPECTACULARIFFIC POETICA FANTASTICA....phew i need to calm down

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

dawn to dusk
Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 68
Colorado

2 posted 2001-12-13 11:30 PM

This is beautiful Randy!!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-12-14 02:10 AM

Enjoyed reading this...James

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2001-12-14 02:12 AM

Wonderful write.
Peaches

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-12-14 08:17 AM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (smiles) Always look for the sunshine in life, for love alone produces it and your heart always radiates with it. (sigh) I am happy to see that you are happy, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Randy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

6 posted 2001-12-15 01:50 AM

Have I mentioned I love LOVE!!!

-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-12-16 11:38 PM

Hypnosis-
   Beautifully penned thoughts.
   Really enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2001-12-16 11:44 PM

*sigh* I so love to read of people in love. You pen your heart with a beauty that makes me sigh. Wonderful writing. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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