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amigo
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0 posted 2001-12-13 07:36 PM



This really is a hard work to do;
Now, I have nothing else to turn to;
Whenever I put in, you add on too;
For, You are there, here with me....

I enjoy eating what catches my eye;
May be it is fries and apple pie;
I know for sure you won't say good-bye;
For, You are there, here with me....

I would love to play with my puppy, Dog;
I would like to walk, run and jog;
But, I can't move, feel like a log;
For, You are there, here with me....

Leave me alone, for a day or two;
How to shed a few, I have no clue;
'Cause, you're stuck to me like crazy glue;
For, You are there, here with me....
                                    


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[This message has been edited by amigo (edited 12-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 amigo - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-12-13 07:40 PM



WOW do I love this one  

Great job!!!!

Titia

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2 posted 2001-12-13 08:00 PM


this is just too cute   good job  
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3 posted 2001-12-13 09:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so cute and wonderful, sweet Amigo, I love it! (big hugggssssss) Your poems are always a pleasure to read, we all love you so very much! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet amigo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Rogue24
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4 posted 2001-12-14 03:06 AM


I was coming on so late hoping for a laff and indeed I found it, just as I thot I was the only one with the bad habit of eating!  

Cheers! WELL DONE!
Ter.

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5 posted 2001-12-14 09:56 AM



It's fun to see that not everyone takes things so seriously...this is charming, and Lady will approve, I am sure!

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6 posted 2001-12-14 10:39 AM



I love to laugh, and you've provided me with the kick-start I need to get through my day!  Thank you for this little gem!

Startime
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7 posted 2001-12-14 11:14 AM


BRAVO!!Oh yes, I agree...this is so well done. Wonderful.  **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amigo
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8 posted 2001-12-14 06:20 PM


Titia - Thank you...happy that you liked it...

Susan - Thank you...love your words...

Noah - Thank you for your kind words...liked your sparkling little trees...

Ter - Thank you dear...happy that i could give you a little laugh,..though not accompany you for a little snack...

Karilea - ohoh..i was thinking i was very serious about this when i wrote.. ..anyway, thanks for your words...

Lady In White - Thank you, you've given such an inspire that i couldn't stop at one...thanks again...

Startime - Thank you for your hugs & kisses & your sweet words...

luv & hugs,
amigo

Larry C
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9 posted 2001-12-16 02:46 AM


amigo,
Humor! What's wrong with me. How come I couldn't see that in this challenge? LOL Great fun!  

amigo
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10 posted 2001-12-16 11:20 AM


Larry - Thank you for your words...glad that i could give a little humor, always taking a lot from you...
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