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The Way You Make Me Feel
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The Way You Make Me Feel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Please don't ask me why I have so much love for you And why my heart always skips a beat Whenever you come into view The smile on my face always broadens Whenever we walk hand in hand How I love standing with you by the water As our feet sink so slowly into the sand How I love your arms around me As the sun sinks way down low How radiantly our love shines Underneath the full moons glow How I love the way you love me How much you fill my inner soul I'm captivated by your being And as a woman I feel whole In my dreams you are beside me As you take my hand in yours So warmly my heart welcomes you As it opens up its doors We sit together for hours Not always with words do we speak As we scale the heights of passion And reach its highest peak Your sensual touch ignites me Like an ember how it burns You reach so deeply inside me And so much more of you I yearn How we wile away the hours As love takes us to many a place But all too soon you are gone As a tear travels slowly down my face Suetang [This message has been edited by Suetang (edited 12-13-2001).] |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
What a beautiful poem...it is always so tragic when we deeply love someone and they leave...i hope everything works out for you! -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Sue, you are soooooooo romantic, I cried feeling your tears at the end but I know deep down with a beautiful loving heart like yours, you are destined to fall in love all over again forever with true love! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your beautiful words always make me feel happy! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
So very much love, enjoyment and sadly the departing saying goodbye...well written.. Lots of feelings here. |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Suetang, "Parting is such sweet sorrow . . . " Hope you and this love met again on the 'morrow. Beautiful! JoMason 12/13/01 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
rebekah Thank you so much for your lovely words. Noah Once again you humble me with your kind words. Magnus I'm so glad you liked this one. Jo How kind you are and I thank you so much. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Your poems are consistently wonderful. It's easy to understand the tear with all that love.  |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh wow! THis poem is so sweet!!! I hope this love you have encountered lasts forever and ever. I almost shed a tear while reading this, not a tear of sorrow, but a tear of happpiness, for you have found a love that not many people experience. I wish you the best with it! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Larry As always you are so very kind. Randy Thank you for your lovely words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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