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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-12-13 04:38 PM



Oh She Came A'Caroling

~*Marge Tindal*~

Oh she came a'caroling
this tiny waif of voice
Giving song to feelings
of wishes of her choice


Let there be peace on earth
sang she from her heart
and let it begin with me
as the perfect place to start

This tiny voice of love
full-sung for all to hear
Let there be peace on earth
and let it draw us near
the peace that was meant to be
let it dwell forever in me

As I believe it should be
With God as our Father
help me to help others to know
Brothers all are we
hands and voices joined in glee
Let me walk with my brother
In perfect harmony


I lift this voice in angelic song
Let peace begin with me
as I take you along
Let this be the moment now
With ev'ry step I take

I lift you in the serenity
breathless voices in the quake
Let this be my solemn vow
as voices join so merrily
To take each moment and live
Each moment in peace eternally

Let there be peace on earth
and let it begin with me~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-13 04:48 PM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Yes, may there be peace and harmony for all the world, and may loves word fill all ears and hearts of the world with joy! (smiles) It may be a dream now, but as long as we can all find peace in our own hearts, I know we can make this dream come true!!! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I join you in this golden prayer of love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-13 05:14 PM


Oh yes Marge....I do so much agree...Would it
not be so nice as to have peace on earth?
Could we ever experience that,  even for a
mere second of time?

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3 posted 2001-12-13 05:33 PM


Sweet Marge,
Add another wish to the fire. Hugs and kisses
And your poem is outstanding.

Martie
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4 posted 2001-12-13 07:32 PM


Marge--I could hear the music!!!!  My new computer is awesome..your poem is magic of love..peace to you, sister of my heart!
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5 posted 2001-12-13 08:07 PM


Yes, I like this too.  
Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-12-13 08:21 PM



Well this only could come from you
my sweet lady
Such a beautiful poem
Such sweet words
Such loving heart

Titia

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7 posted 2001-12-14 09:36 AM


An Angelic aura of poetic wonder! The gentleness of this well penned piece lifted my spirits and filled me with the true spirit of what Christmas is really all about.   Bravo! Thanks for the light of love. (((hugs))) Maggie ((~.~))


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8 posted 2001-12-14 09:43 AM


AMEN

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9 posted 2001-12-14 12:43 PM


This is just lovely, Marge! A very beautiful poem. I love it. The picture, too.
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10 posted 2001-12-14 12:49 PM


Very beautiful write, a dream not unlike many in this world. Merry Christmas, God Bless.
Ter

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

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11 posted 2001-12-14 03:19 PM


I love the way you've woven this, Marge... it's a beautiful poem/prayer. *S*


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12 posted 2001-12-15 10:52 AM


Marge,
  Sweet is the song of peace and harmony.
Well done,friend. I'm saving this one in my library collection! (((HUGZ))) Dennis :^)

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13 posted 2001-12-15 11:11 AM


Thank you for sharing your always beautiful heart dear lady.  

(((hugs)))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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14 posted 2001-12-15 01:14 PM


Thank you for bringing and wishing such joy and happiness. Your thoughts are as beautiful as the gift you present. His miracle to you this season and always.

Merry Christmas you to and yours! Peace and Hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

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15 posted 2001-12-15 01:28 PM


*sigh* the perfect wish for all the world...if only all would listen and see what a difference it would make. BRAVO!!!!STANDING OVATION!! I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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16 posted 2001-12-15 07:30 PM


Beautiful thoughts, Marge! Lovely poem!
Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2001-12-15 09:11 PM


A beautiful Christmas card with a beautiful message, Marge.
May peace be yours this Christmas
                    
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copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (edited 12-15-2001).]

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18 posted 2001-12-15 09:21 PM


Very pretty! *s

A few nights ago, carrollers sang up and down my street and it was so nice to hear them, and an extra bonus because my family and myself have been hit with the flu this week so it was like angels came to bid us well.

*s

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2001-12-20 01:27 AM


My friends~
How can I thank you all for the beauty of your thoughts on this little piece from my heart~

One of our members has asked to place it on her Card Site at -
A Sandbox Greeting - please pay her a visit~
http://www.asandboxgreeting.com/ohshecame.html
Thank you, Sandy~
*Hugs* to all for a joyous Holiday Season~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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