When I am....you are... (Lady's Challenge)

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-13 02:56 PM

I am....I am here...I always will be.
I cannot ever go where you are not..
Give me a moment of your memory
For my memory is there....you are there.

I listen to the winds that whisper.
Softest words say all my ears need.
I know in my old heart that all is.
For when I am, you always are.

Take me into the meadows of your mind.
Wake me from dreams when reality
For....even though you are there...
You know you are always here with me.

Love me tenderly each rise of the sun.
Hold me within your great strength.
Comfort my loneliness when away.
I am here...and there...when you are.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-12-13 03:06 PM

A wonderful response to the challenge! Lady will be thrilled....

As will the rest of Passions....

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-12-13 03:07 PM

BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! WHAT A BEAUTIFUL CHALLENGE YOU FULFILLED!!! (smiles) She will always be there for you just as you always will be close to her and your loved ones forever! (smiles) Your loving heart is full with wonderful suprises, dearest friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-12-13 03:40 PM

well done Sir. . . a walk through those meadows is always wonderful. . .

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-12-13 04:26 PM

I think this is the best one yet

It's sooooooo beautiful

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-12-13 04:37 PM

I do love your work.

I think this is a wonderful answer to the challenge.

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2001-12-13 06:01 PM

Ah Magnus, I read where someone made sure you saw this challenge, and I commend you, for each and every word, and for each and every sway...

you do this so well. Challenge well met, dear man!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-12-13 06:38 PM

Thanx Karilea...much enjoyed the little
adventure.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-12-13 06:39 PM

Noah...thank you...we gave it a shot...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-12-13 06:40 PM

Sven...thank you very much...much appreciate
the complement.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-12-13 06:40 PM

Sue...thank you...your eyes see things
differently than mine do...thank you.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-12-13 06:41 PM

Temptress...appreciate very much your
warm words...happy that you enjoy my writing.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-12-13 06:43 PM

Lady in White...yep...I could not find it..
and SEA (Sue) and Startime both helped me
get on track...enjoyed it...Thank You
much for your warm reception...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2001-12-13 06:48 PM

Enjoyed Barry....Challenge well met. ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2001-12-13 07:04 PM

Thank you Nancy...Now...where is your answer to the challenge? I think you would do
very well at it..

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2001-12-13 07:09 PM

Magnus--Loved the unique twist you put on this..well done!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2001-12-13 07:15 PM

Thank you Martie...guess that is just how
I am with poetry at times....Just seems to
come out that way...

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

17 posted 2001-12-14 11:06 AM

*sigh* of course coming from you I knew it would be sensually perfect. A wonderful job meeting the challenge, Magnus. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-12-14 04:54 PM

thanx Karen...I sorta just muddled my way
through it...seems it all came together just
fine though...Happy you thought it was good.

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