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Eyes Meeting |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Twin brown windows, almost indescrible, staring back at me. Brown and gold, holding hands and dancing around and round. This is all that is the world right now. |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Your eyes fixed my gaze glued a moment in time our hearts subdued LOL I tend to ramble, this was just an after thot from your poem. Lovely words for a wonderful moment between two lovers. Hugs  Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
It is amazing how we can be lost while looking into eyes. You have expressed it so very well here. Wonderful writing. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Your description of a person's eyes leaves nothing to be seen, for you have sighted it all. Opeth |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Rebekah, you are soooooooo romantic, such love fills your words as you take us to an Eden behind a sweet lovers eyes! (sigh) Sooooooo lovely! May true love forever fill your golden heart, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Rebekah, thank youfor sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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