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You Are There (LADY IN WHITE CHALLENGE)
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You Are There (LADY IN WHITE CHALLENGE) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You are there, here with me but not within my sight although so many miles away your star still shines so bright. You are there, here with me in thoughts your held so dear missing you, my heart is blue it sheds a single tear. You are there, here with me in spirit never far apart feelings felt and memories kept bound together in the heart. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 12-13-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is soft and so lovely!! I am really enjoying all the different styles to this challenge!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, A lovely lovely. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful sweet poem and it meets the challenge so well. Lady will be SO pleased! |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
WOW! Bravo! Very touching write! I love these challenges, it really brings out different sides of people. Cheers! Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
You did a great job with this, a real nice read with a gentle flow. Must be why you’re Gentle Spirit, cause it’s spiritual too Bill |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This goes so well with your penname... wonderfully gentle and full with lovely spirit... Regards, sudhir |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romantically gentle just like your spirit is. This is so very tender. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Just a quick pop in to thank you all. I saw the challenge before coming to work this am and by the time I was to work I had it. Thanks all, and thanks to lady for the challenge. Made me use my brain a bit....thanks.  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, I love this Donna, your love shines in this beautiful challenge! (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, love is always in your heart and as long as you love yourself and believe in yourself, love will always make you happy. (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Donna! (kiss on cheek) YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This fits you so very, very well, like a warm shawl...just enough to warm the chill of a cold night...well done, very well done! |
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