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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2001-12-13 10:06 AM

across many deep valleys
and beyond the seven seas
faraway, where far can be
there you are, where eyes can't see

I had missed you such a lot,
so much that I often thought,
that our friendship had been shot
in some strange war, never fought

this went on till truth glisten'd
like one bright ray from the sun
that you are the special one
in my heart's web, so well-spun

when I curve into some bends
feeling drained with sun's descend
there you are always, my friend,
still smiling at day's fag end

faraway, where eyes can't see
yet you are there, here with Me
in my heart, where eyes don't see
gifting hugs and smiles for free

the challenge is here : /pip/Forum52/HTML/001973.html
thanks for this one, O Lady

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-12-13 10:10 AM

Sudhir lyer~ this is absolutely stunning! I love it! Challenge exceeded!!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-12-13 10:11 AM

Sudhir,
Common symptons of love. Sometimes a candy bar will help. Enjoyed

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-12-13 10:11 AM

Sudhir, Lady in White will be so delightfully pleased with this one, I know! You did an exceptional piece of work with this challenge...we ought to challenge you more, just to make sure you stick around Passions! It is SO good to have you home!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-13 11:30 AM

(smiles) Love will always be shining in our hearts, just as the love and compassion you share with us all always whsipers through your lovely words! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet Sudhir, we all love you so very much! (big hugggggsssss) You are always here with me in my heart and spirit, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Rogue24
Member

since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-12-13 11:40 AM

Amazing write! BRAVO! I am awestruck at the talents within the forum! Never ceases to amaze me. Cheers!

Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

6 posted 2001-12-13 12:33 PM

Thank you all so much...

Really, when I came here this morning... I did not have anything to write about, and no intention to write at all... then I read Lady's poem and then the challenge cast its spell on me... and this was the result... all magic... Thank you so much Lady for this wonderful moment of inspire...

and am I glad that all of you enjoyed what you saw...

regards,
sudhir

amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

7 posted 2001-12-13 01:01 PM

Sudhir....this is written very well...an expression conveyed well...thank you

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2001-12-13 01:05 PM

*sigh* how wonderfully beautiful is this poem. I felt the reaching out in every word. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Opeth
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

9 posted 2001-12-13 01:09 PM

An excellent way with words is most definitely portrayed in this writing.

Opeth

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2001-12-13 01:52 PM

We love it when you are here with us, while you are also there.
These challenges are so much fun, and can really trigger the mind to shoot for the stars. Your mind is always cosmic.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-12-13 03:43 PM

well done my friend. . . a superb use of the language and the thoughts behind the words. . .

I enjoyed it very much. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

12 posted 2001-12-13 05:59 PM

Ah Sudhir, how could not you write of something so obviously close to your heart...

Challenge well met, in the here of there...

quote:
when I curve into some bends
feeling drained with sun's descend
there you are always, my friend,
still smiling at day's fag end

faraway, where eyes can't see
yet you are there, here with Me
in my heart, where eyes don't see
gifting hugs and smiles for free

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

13 posted 2001-12-13 08:25 PM

Just so very beautiful Sudhir

Very touchy, reached my heart

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2001-12-13 09:15 PM

Sudhir, Very well done and a challenge well met.
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

15 posted 2001-12-14 05:41 AM

thank you all very very much...

Regards,
sudhir

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