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kaile
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0 posted 2001-12-13 02:28 AM


School was out and
we arranged outings
with people,
whose happenings
were deduced from
an occasional
email or icq message.
We met up eagerly,
dying to catch up
with each other
and the good old days

Don't take offense, okay
This is nothing about you

In the midst of
the rowdy get-togethers
and gossipy chats,
a shroud of loneliness
came over me
It stabbed me vulnerable
and I wasn't quite the same
as before

Do I make friends
because i enjoy
your charming characters
and your warm companionship
or because
i desperately need
my emotional void
to be filled?

Am I being sincere
in wanting to know you
or am I just
trespassing irritably,
trying to pass time?

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kaile
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1 posted 2001-12-13 02:32 AM


i hope you think this is thought-provoking...hmm, i later came to the conclusion that i am really keen to know people, no thanks to the unquenchable thrist of curiousity that Virgos are supposed to have..ha!
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2 posted 2001-12-13 02:44 AM


I have often wondered this myself.  I think it's normal.  Not much comfort in that, but I enjoyed the poem.
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3 posted 2001-12-13 02:46 AM


It is good to be thirsty.   You can never have too many friends, only too many enemies.  Have some fun during your holiday break.
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4 posted 2001-12-13 10:59 PM


KAILE!!  that was cool!  

so thats why you ask for answers to such odd, out of the blue  questions....'research'!  lol

really enjoyed  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

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5 posted 2001-12-13 11:02 PM


hey kaile, why do you think I write half the stuff that I write???     LOL

I like this. . . it presents a unique question. . . one that I, as a fellow Virgo, cannot wait to see the answers for. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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