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Left Behind
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Left Behind |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Left Behind  Along the road of hearts entwined I seem to never find beloved designed by Cupid's bow for only me alas, I'm cast to misery ~ Faith's fool, I pray to heaven above to mystic moon, to send me a love one that's defined by my soul's very voice one that's destiny's perfect choice ~ Still, the sky and moon are not alligned it seems a kismet kind I'll never find a soulmate who knows of rapture refined one that is strong to stand the test of time ~ Oh, night of butter toffee stars why do you mock me from afar? have you not loved, have you not felt? the hand of jokers I've been dealt? ~ Hopes erase as dreams unwind, sorrow screams within my mind, will romancing and dancing set me free? will a beautiful kiss ever taste me? ~ I gaze at nature's grandest of shows seeing lovers unfold in petals of rose like a feather on the wind, they shall be akin with timeless reverie laughing through days on sigh's amaze on promises, true, not meant for me ~ Even Spring is cold when you're alone pricked by thorns that cut to the bone everything has it's purpose...it's season, I know but, why must I die when everyone grows? ~ Why must love be stripped away when shown to be dangled in dreams then set to stone? Why breathe when passion has no home? Accepting that any chance of amore has flown ~ Along the trail of hearts entwined in weeping walk to truth, unkind it seems peace of mind I'll never find just defeat and despair to pollute the air with the pain of forever being left behind By Melissa P. Monette  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) Oh Melissa, I know just how you feel, for I always feel like a fool too when I dream of love and wake up knowing it was too good to be true. (big hugggssssss) But I also know deep down, with all my heart, that He is preparing all our loves for our hearts, and He will give us all eternal happiness! (sigh) Always believe in yourself, sweet friend, for the perfect love of your life will come to you and give you heaven forever! (sigh) Spring will blossom in your loving heart, sweet friend, I believe in you! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Melissa! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet honeybee, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Melissa this is a fabulous piece of writing, but never say never love. I am proof that love comes again,  Truly this is an utterly wonderful write, and you will find it again. Love will come calling just when you think you'll never see it again. Trust me I do know.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy    Truly don't give up kid,  love will always find you I know it ITo give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is heart wrenchingly beautiful Melissa. But, your poetry always leaves me in awe of your talent. May the new year bring new love to fill your heart and pen. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"night of butter toffee stars. . . " that's the kind of imagery that makes you one of my favorites my friend. . . well done. . . and heartwrenchingly so. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
tonight you write my heart...helen |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ah sweet Melissa..you are in for it now! Know why? Cause just when we give up and give in to the Will of God...that's when things start to happen, lovely things!!!Just you watch, and i want to be one of the first to know!! Hugs, Ellie  A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, you have to stop writing these heartwrenchers! once again, you've blown me away with your expression and depth... smile!, it will get better |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
quote: Oh, night of butter toffee stars Melissa, what an absolutely beautiful piece. ~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You said it all...I always find myself saying...well maybe it will be the next one...and I have met some very interesting women...just not interested in me...ha...James |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
I have to agree with everyone else this is an absolute beautiful write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah Melissa, you know this is the story of my life. "Why must love be stripped away when shown to be dangled in dreams then set to stone? Why breathe when passion has no home? Accepting that any chance of amore has flown" These are the questions I ask every day. Beautifully done, my friend Sandra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Melissa, this is a wonderful write. Love will come your way. I've always heard that there is someone out there for everyone. When you least expect it, it will come to you. |
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