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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-12-12 09:38 PM


If I was a talented artist
I'd paint a picture just for you
With all the colors of the rainbow
And a boat made just for two

We'd sail off into the sunset
To the land of eternal love
And we'd be guided throughout our journey
On the wings of a beautiful white dove

But this picture remains a fantasy
As I'm unable to paint you see
But I'm wondering if my humble words
Could relay the same message to you from me

My words would speak pure emotion
From the door of my heart to yours
I'm not like an actor on the stage
Who constantly yearns for your applause

My words won't cost you any money
They come from deep inside my soul
And if in some way they touch your heart
Then I've achieved the ultimate goal


Suetang

[This message has been edited by Suetang (edited 12-12-2001).]

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lone_poet707
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1 posted 2001-12-12 09:43 PM


This is a beautiful piece! I haven't put much in my library, but this will certainly put in there.
  -Joe

Suetang
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2 posted 2001-12-12 10:10 PM


Hello Joe
Thank you so very much for taking the time to read this and I'm so glad you liked it.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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3 posted 2001-12-12 10:45 PM




(sigh) Oh Sue, you can, for your beautiful words always paint the most beautiful visions of pure love! (smiles) May you forever paint visions of love srapture! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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